Yoon to jagjit ji ne Qateel Shifaee ki bahut sari ghazalen gaee hain par mujhe unamein se tin meri aal taim fevarat ghazalen hain. to chaliye aaj ki sham ki mahafil sajate hain jagjit ji ki gaee in tinon ghazalon se . aur pichhali post ki tarah mahafil ka ant Qateel ki aavaj mein padi gaee unaki ek khoobasoorat ghazal se....
zindagi mein kabhi aap jab apane pyare hamasafar ke sath baithe hon aur man apane sathi ke prati apane prem ko abhivyakt karane ko machal raha ho to kis tarah apani bhavanaon ko shabd denge aapa? kya kahenge aap usase ? aapaka uttar to mujhe nahin maloom par main to Qateel ki is ghazal ka hi sahara loonga. isaka har ek sher kamal hai. kanlej ke jamane mein is ghazal ko jab pahali bar suna tha to mahinon apane aap ko is ghazal ke prabhav se mukt nahin kar paya tha. daraasal sidhe sade shabdon se ek gahari bhavana ko nikal pana sabake boote ki bat nahin hai. par Qateel ko is fan mein kamal hasil tha. matale par gaur karen kya aagaj hai is ghazal ka
apane hothon par sajana chahata hoon
aa tujhe main gunagunana chahata hoon
aur fir ye shera..subhanaallah !
koee aansu tere daman par girakar
boond ko moti banana chahata hoon
thak gaya main karate-karate yad tujhako
ab tujhe main yaad aana chahata hoon
chha raha hai sari basti mein andhera
raushani ko ghar jalana chahata hoon
aakhari hichaki tere janon pe aaye
maut bhi main shayarana chahata hoon
Qateel ki zindagi mein kaee premikayen aaeen jinake bare mein prakash pandit ji ne likha hai
Y".......prem aur pooja ki sima tak prem usane apani har premika se kiya hai aur usaki har premika ne varadan-svaroop usaki shayari mein nikhar aur madhury paida kiya hai, jaise ‘chandrakanta’ nam ki ek film aiktres ne kiya hai jisase usaka prem keval dedh varsh tak chal saka aur jisaka ant bilakul natakiy aur shayar ke liye atyant dukhadayi siddh huaa. lekin ‘Qateela’ ke kathananusar : "yadi yah ghatana n ghati hoti to shayad ab tak main vahi paramparagat ghazalen likh raha hota, jinamein yatharth ki apeksha banavat aur faishan hota hai. is ghatana ne mujhe yatharthavad ke marg par dal diya aur mainne vyaktigat ghatana ko sansarik rang mein dhalane ka prayatn kiya. atayev usake bad jo kuchh bhi mainne likha hai vah kalpit kam aur vastavik adhik hai."...................."
prakash shayar ki zindagi mein prerana ke mahattv ke bare mein apane lekh mein aage likhate hain.....
chandrakanta se prem aur vichhoh se pahale ‘Qateela’ shifaee aartanad kism ki
paramparagat shayari karate the aur ‘shifa’ kanapuri nam ke ek shayar se apane kalam par salah lete the. fir 'ahamad nadim kasami' sahab se bhi unhonne maitripoorn paramarsh liye. lekin kisi ki islah ya paramarsh tab tak kisi shayar ke liye hitakar siddh nahin ho sakate jab tak ki svayan shayar ke jivan mein koee prerak vastu n ho. lagan aur kshamata ka apana alag sthan hai, lekin is disha ki samast kshamatayen maulik roop se us prerana hi ke vashibhoot hoti hain,jise ‘manovrttanta’ ka nam diya ja sakata hai.
agar oopar ki ghazal mein aapako prem ka sailab umadata dikh raha hai to is ghazal par nigah daliye. bevafaee se chhalani hrday ki vedana najar aayegi aapako isamein. daraasal kisi shayar ya kavi ki lekhani usake vyaktitv ka aaeena hai bashartte use pad aur samajh pane ka hunar aap mein maujood ho. is ghazal ko mainne pahali bar aakashavani patana se suna tha aur pahali bar sun kar man mein ek udasinata ka bhav vyapt ho gaya tha. mere ek mitr ne bataya tha ki jagjit ji apani kanasart mein ye ghazal jaldi nahin gate aur gate hain to matale aur usake bad ka sher unhen apane bete ki yad dilakar bhavuk kar deta hai. jagjit ji ne is ghazal mein Qateel ke sahab ke un char sheron ko chuna hai jo is ghazal ki jan hain...
sadama to hai mujhe bhi ki tujhase juda hoon main
lekin ye sochata hoon ki ab tera kya hoon main
bikhara pada hai tere hi ghar mein tera vajood
bekar mahafilon mein tujhe dhoondhata hoon main
main khudakashi ke jurm ka karata hoon aitaraf
apane badan ki kabr mein kab se gada hoon main
kis-kisaka nam laoon jaban par ki tere sath
har roj ek shakhs naya dekhata hoon main
na jane kis ada se liya toone mera nam
duniya samajh rahi hai ke sab kuchh tera hoon main
le mere tajurbon se sabak ai mere rakib
do char sal umr mein tujhase bada hoon main
jaga huaa jamir vo aaeena hai "Qateela"
sone se pahale roj jise dekhata hoon main
zindagi ki kitani sunasan raten aasaman ke in chand taron se mook sanvad karate huye bitaee hain usaka koee hisab filahal mere pas nahin. aaj bhi jab kabhi abhi apane ghar jata hoon to rat mein chhat par chahalakadami karate huye sitaron se Qateel ki juban mein guftagu karana bahut bhata hai..
pareshan rat sari hai sitaron tum to so jao
sukoot-e-marg tari hai sitaron tum to so jao
hanso aur hanste-hanste doobte jao khalaon mein
hamein ye rat bhari hai sitaron tum to so jao
tumhen kya aaj bhi koee agar milane nahin aaya
ye baji hamne hari hai sitaron tum to so jao
kahe jate ho ro-ro ke hamara haal duniya se
ye kaisi rajdari hai sitaron tum to so ja
hamein to aaj ki shab pau fate tak jagana hoga
yahi kismat hamari hai sitaron tum to so jao
hamein bhi nind aa jayegi ham bhi so hi jayenge
abhi kuchh bekarari hai sitaron tum to so jao
is ghazal ko pakistani film ishk e laila mein bhi shamil kiya gaya tha jahan ise aavaj di thi ikabal bano ne. pichhali post mein yoonus bhaee ne Qateel ke mushayare ka vidio dene ka anurodh kiya tha. to aaj sunane ke sath Qateel sahab ko dekhiye unaki mashahoor ghazal hath diya usane mere hath mein....
hath diya usane mere hath mein
main to vali ban gaya ik rat mein
ishk karoge to kamaoge nam
tohamaten bantati nahin khairat mein
ishk buri shai sahi par doston
dakhal na do tum meri har bat mein
mujh pe tavojjah hai sab *aafak ke (*sansar)
koee kashish to hai meri jat mein
rabt badaya na 'Qateel' isaliye
fark tha donon ke khayalat mein
aaj to bas itana hi agale bhag mein fir milenge unki kch aur ghazlon ke sath..
zindagi mein kabhi aap jab apane pyare hamasafar ke sath baithe hon aur man apane sathi ke prati apane prem ko abhivyakt karane ko machal raha ho to kis tarah apani bhavanaon ko shabd denge aapa? kya kahenge aap usase ? aapaka uttar to mujhe nahin maloom par main to Qateel ki is ghazal ka hi sahara loonga. isaka har ek sher kamal hai. kanlej ke jamane mein is ghazal ko jab pahali bar suna tha to mahinon apane aap ko is ghazal ke prabhav se mukt nahin kar paya tha. daraasal sidhe sade shabdon se ek gahari bhavana ko nikal pana sabake boote ki bat nahin hai. par Qateel ko is fan mein kamal hasil tha. matale par gaur karen kya aagaj hai is ghazal ka
apane hothon par sajana chahata hoon
aa tujhe main gunagunana chahata hoon
aur fir ye shera..subhanaallah !
koee aansu tere daman par girakar
boond ko moti banana chahata hoon
thak gaya main karate-karate yad tujhako
ab tujhe main yaad aana chahata hoon
chha raha hai sari basti mein andhera
raushani ko ghar jalana chahata hoon
aakhari hichaki tere janon pe aaye
maut bhi main shayarana chahata hoon
Qateel ki zindagi mein kaee premikayen aaeen jinake bare mein prakash pandit ji ne likha hai
Y".......prem aur pooja ki sima tak prem usane apani har premika se kiya hai aur usaki har premika ne varadan-svaroop usaki shayari mein nikhar aur madhury paida kiya hai, jaise ‘chandrakanta’ nam ki ek film aiktres ne kiya hai jisase usaka prem keval dedh varsh tak chal saka aur jisaka ant bilakul natakiy aur shayar ke liye atyant dukhadayi siddh huaa. lekin ‘Qateela’ ke kathananusar : "yadi yah ghatana n ghati hoti to shayad ab tak main vahi paramparagat ghazalen likh raha hota, jinamein yatharth ki apeksha banavat aur faishan hota hai. is ghatana ne mujhe yatharthavad ke marg par dal diya aur mainne vyaktigat ghatana ko sansarik rang mein dhalane ka prayatn kiya. atayev usake bad jo kuchh bhi mainne likha hai vah kalpit kam aur vastavik adhik hai."...................."
prakash shayar ki zindagi mein prerana ke mahattv ke bare mein apane lekh mein aage likhate hain.....
chandrakanta se prem aur vichhoh se pahale ‘Qateela’ shifaee aartanad kism ki
paramparagat shayari karate the aur ‘shifa’ kanapuri nam ke ek shayar se apane kalam par salah lete the. fir 'ahamad nadim kasami' sahab se bhi unhonne maitripoorn paramarsh liye. lekin kisi ki islah ya paramarsh tab tak kisi shayar ke liye hitakar siddh nahin ho sakate jab tak ki svayan shayar ke jivan mein koee prerak vastu n ho. lagan aur kshamata ka apana alag sthan hai, lekin is disha ki samast kshamatayen maulik roop se us prerana hi ke vashibhoot hoti hain,jise ‘manovrttanta’ ka nam diya ja sakata hai.
agar oopar ki ghazal mein aapako prem ka sailab umadata dikh raha hai to is ghazal par nigah daliye. bevafaee se chhalani hrday ki vedana najar aayegi aapako isamein. daraasal kisi shayar ya kavi ki lekhani usake vyaktitv ka aaeena hai bashartte use pad aur samajh pane ka hunar aap mein maujood ho. is ghazal ko mainne pahali bar aakashavani patana se suna tha aur pahali bar sun kar man mein ek udasinata ka bhav vyapt ho gaya tha. mere ek mitr ne bataya tha ki jagjit ji apani kanasart mein ye ghazal jaldi nahin gate aur gate hain to matale aur usake bad ka sher unhen apane bete ki yad dilakar bhavuk kar deta hai. jagjit ji ne is ghazal mein Qateel ke sahab ke un char sheron ko chuna hai jo is ghazal ki jan hain...
sadama to hai mujhe bhi ki tujhase juda hoon main
lekin ye sochata hoon ki ab tera kya hoon main
bikhara pada hai tere hi ghar mein tera vajood
bekar mahafilon mein tujhe dhoondhata hoon main
main khudakashi ke jurm ka karata hoon aitaraf
apane badan ki kabr mein kab se gada hoon main
kis-kisaka nam laoon jaban par ki tere sath
har roj ek shakhs naya dekhata hoon main
na jane kis ada se liya toone mera nam
duniya samajh rahi hai ke sab kuchh tera hoon main
le mere tajurbon se sabak ai mere rakib
do char sal umr mein tujhase bada hoon main
jaga huaa jamir vo aaeena hai "Qateela"
sone se pahale roj jise dekhata hoon main
zindagi ki kitani sunasan raten aasaman ke in chand taron se mook sanvad karate huye bitaee hain usaka koee hisab filahal mere pas nahin. aaj bhi jab kabhi abhi apane ghar jata hoon to rat mein chhat par chahalakadami karate huye sitaron se Qateel ki juban mein guftagu karana bahut bhata hai..
pareshan rat sari hai sitaron tum to so jao
sukoot-e-marg tari hai sitaron tum to so jao
hanso aur hanste-hanste doobte jao khalaon mein
hamein ye rat bhari hai sitaron tum to so jao
tumhen kya aaj bhi koee agar milane nahin aaya
ye baji hamne hari hai sitaron tum to so jao
kahe jate ho ro-ro ke hamara haal duniya se
ye kaisi rajdari hai sitaron tum to so ja
hamein to aaj ki shab pau fate tak jagana hoga
yahi kismat hamari hai sitaron tum to so jao
hamein bhi nind aa jayegi ham bhi so hi jayenge
abhi kuchh bekarari hai sitaron tum to so jao
is ghazal ko pakistani film ishk e laila mein bhi shamil kiya gaya tha jahan ise aavaj di thi ikabal bano ne. pichhali post mein yoonus bhaee ne Qateel ke mushayare ka vidio dene ka anurodh kiya tha. to aaj sunane ke sath Qateel sahab ko dekhiye unaki mashahoor ghazal hath diya usane mere hath mein....
hath diya usane mere hath mein
main to vali ban gaya ik rat mein
ishk karoge to kamaoge nam
tohamaten bantati nahin khairat mein
ishk buri shai sahi par doston
dakhal na do tum meri har bat mein
mujh pe tavojjah hai sab *aafak ke (*sansar)
koee kashish to hai meri jat mein
rabt badaya na 'Qateel' isaliye
fark tha donon ke khayalat mein
aaj to bas itana hi agale bhag mein fir milenge unki kch aur ghazlon ke sath..
