Qateel ki shayari ko jitana padhenge aap ye mahasoos karenge ki prem, viyog, bevafaee ki bhavana ko jis shiddat se unhonne apani lekhani ka vishay banaya hai, vaisa gine chune shayaron ki shayari men hi najar aata hai. aaj ke is bhag men aapako sunavayenge Qateel ki aavaj men unaki ek khoobasoorat kata aur ghazal, unaki shakl-o-soorat ke bare men prakash pandit ki chutakiyan aur aakhir men prem ke viyog men doobi unaki ek ghazal jise apani aavaj men mainne aap tak pahunchane ka prayas kiya hai.
kya aap manate hain ki prem men doobakar koee chamatkar sanbhav hai? kya aapane ऍsa mahasoos nahin kiya ki prem aapaki soch ko us muhane tak le jata hai jahan dimag roopi nadi men uthati laharen shithil pad jati hain. shayad ऍse hi kisi mood men Qateel kah uthate hain
bashar 1 ke roop men ik dilaruba tilism bane
shafaka2 men dhoop milayen to usaka jism bane
vo mojaja3 ki had tak pahunch gaya hai Qateel
roop koee bhi likhoon usi ka isma4 banen
1.manushya, 2.pratah kaal ya sandhya ke samay men aakash men chhaee lali, 3. chamatkar, 4.chhavi, nam
apani isrecording men Qateel ek alahada andaj men jab apana ye sher padate hain to man bag-bag ho jata hai
na koee khab hamare hain na tabire hain
ham to pani pe banaee huee tasaviren hain
aur jab is sher ka jikr aaya hai to is ghazal ka makata bhi aapase bantata chaloon
ho na ho ye koee sach bolane vala hai Qateel
jisake hathon men kalam pavon men janjire hain
to chaliye ab le chalate hain aapako ek mushayare men jahan Qateel apani buland aavaj ye ghazal pad rahe hain aur apane sathiyon ki vaha vahi loot rahe hain.
ye mojaja bhi mohabbat kabhi dikhaye mujhe
ki sang tujh pe gire aur jakhm aaye mujhe
main ghar se teri tamanna pahan ke jab nikaloon
barahana shahar men koee najar na aaye mujhe
vo mera dost hai sare jahan ko hai maloom
daga kare vo kisi se to sharm aaye mujhe
vo meharaban hai to ikarar kyoon nahin karata
vo badaguman hai to sau bar aajamaye mujhe
main apani jat men nilam ho raha hoon Qateel
gam-ye-hayata1 se kah do kharid laye mujhe
1. jeevan
is ghazal men chand sher aur hain jo mujhe behad pyare hain. ab yahan gaur faramaiye kitane tarike se bat rakhi hai apani shayar ne..
main apane panv tale raundata hoon saye ko
badan mera hi sahi, dopahar na bhaye mujhe
aur mere mitr dhyan rakhen :)
vahi to sabase jyada hai nuktachin mera
jo muskura ke hamesha gale lagaye mujhe
ye mushayara to sanbhavatah nabbe ke dashak ke uttarardh ka hai. Qateel ke bare men itana padane ke bad m pathakon men sahaj utsukata jag uthi hogi ki 'mohabbaton ka ye shayar ' apani javani men kaisa dikhata hoga ? mere pas yuva Qateel ki koee tasavir to nahin par prakash pandit ka ye shabd chitra, jaroor unaki shakl-o-soorat ka khaka aapake jehan men khinchane men safal hoga, ऍsa mujhe yakin hai. prakash pandit sahab bade hi majahiya lahaje men yuva Qateel ke bare men likhate hain...
".....Qateel’ shifaee jati ka pathan hai aur ek samay tak gend-balle, raikata, lungiyan aur kulle bechata raha hai, chungikhane men muharriri aur bas-kampaniyon men buking-klarki karata raha hai to usake she’ron ke loch-lachak ko dekhakar aap avashy kuchh der ke liye sochane par vivash ho jayenge. is par yadi kabhi aapako use dekhane ka avasar mil jaye aur aapako pahale se maloom n ho ki vah ‘Qateel’ shifaee hai, to aaj bhi aapako vah shayar ki apeksha ek aisa klark najar aayega jisaki sau sava sau ki tanakhvah ke pichhe aadhe darjan bachche jine ka sahara dhoondh rahe hon. usaka kad maujoon hai, nain-naksh maujoon hain. bal kale aur ghungharale hain. gol chehare par tikhi moonchhen aur chamakili aankhen hain aur vah hamesha ‘taee’ ya ‘bo’ lagane ka aadi. fir bhi n jane kyon pahali najar men vah aisa theth panjabi najar aata hai jo abhi-abhi lassi ke kuhani-bhar lambe do gilas pikar dakar lene ke bare men soch raha ho.
pahali najar men vah jo bhi najar aata ho, do-char najaron ya mulakaton ke bad badi sundar vastavikata khulati hai-ki vah dakar lene ke bare men nahin, apani kisi premika ke bare men soch raha hota hai-us premika ke bare men jo use virah ki aag men jalata chhod gaee, ya us premika ke bare men jise in dinon vah pooja ki sima tak prem karata hai. ......."
oopar ki baton ko samajhane ke liye mujhe kuchh aur kahane ki jaroorat nahin bas is ghazal ko ek bar pad len,
meri zindagi, tu firak hai ,vo ajal se dil men makin sahi
vo nigah-ye-shauk se door hain ,rag-ye-jan1 se lakh karin sahi
1 shareer ki mukhy raktavahini
hamen jan deni hai ek dina, vo kisi tarah vo kahin sahi
hamen aap khinchiye var para, jo nahin koee to hamin sahi
sar-ye-toor sar-ye-hashr ho, hamen intajar kabool hai
vo kabhi milen vo kahin milen, vo kabhi sahi, vo kahin sahi
na ho un pe mera bas nahin, ki ye aashiki hai havas nahin
main unhin ka tha, main unhin ka hoon, vo mere nahin, to nahin sahi
mujhe baithane ki jagah mile, meri aaraju ka bharam rahe
teri anjuman men agar nahin , teri anjuman ke karin sahi
tera dar to hamako na mil saka, teri rahagujar ki jamin sahi
hamen sajada karane se kam hai jo vahan nahin to yahin sahi
use dekhane ki jo lau lagi to Qateel dekh hi lenge ham
vo hajar aankh se door ho, vo hajar pardanashin sahi
mainne Qateel sahab ki aavaj men ye ghazal khojane ki koshish ki par nahin mili to apani aavaj men ise padane ki koshish ki hai. is ghazal ko padate vakt mujhe ek alag tarah ka pravah aur junoon ka ehasas huaa isaliye ye andaja laga sakata hoon ki ise likhane vala apani mohabbat men kis kadar junooni raha hoga.
kya aap manate hain ki prem men doobakar koee chamatkar sanbhav hai? kya aapane ऍsa mahasoos nahin kiya ki prem aapaki soch ko us muhane tak le jata hai jahan dimag roopi nadi men uthati laharen shithil pad jati hain. shayad ऍse hi kisi mood men Qateel kah uthate hain
bashar 1 ke roop men ik dilaruba tilism bane
shafaka2 men dhoop milayen to usaka jism bane
vo mojaja3 ki had tak pahunch gaya hai Qateel
roop koee bhi likhoon usi ka isma4 banen
1.manushya, 2.pratah kaal ya sandhya ke samay men aakash men chhaee lali, 3. chamatkar, 4.chhavi, nam
apani isrecording men Qateel ek alahada andaj men jab apana ye sher padate hain to man bag-bag ho jata hai
na koee khab hamare hain na tabire hain
ham to pani pe banaee huee tasaviren hain
aur jab is sher ka jikr aaya hai to is ghazal ka makata bhi aapase bantata chaloon
ho na ho ye koee sach bolane vala hai Qateel
jisake hathon men kalam pavon men janjire hain
to chaliye ab le chalate hain aapako ek mushayare men jahan Qateel apani buland aavaj ye ghazal pad rahe hain aur apane sathiyon ki vaha vahi loot rahe hain.
ye mojaja bhi mohabbat kabhi dikhaye mujhe
ki sang tujh pe gire aur jakhm aaye mujhe
main ghar se teri tamanna pahan ke jab nikaloon
barahana shahar men koee najar na aaye mujhe
vo mera dost hai sare jahan ko hai maloom
daga kare vo kisi se to sharm aaye mujhe
vo meharaban hai to ikarar kyoon nahin karata
vo badaguman hai to sau bar aajamaye mujhe
main apani jat men nilam ho raha hoon Qateel
gam-ye-hayata1 se kah do kharid laye mujhe
1. jeevan
is ghazal men chand sher aur hain jo mujhe behad pyare hain. ab yahan gaur faramaiye kitane tarike se bat rakhi hai apani shayar ne..
main apane panv tale raundata hoon saye ko
badan mera hi sahi, dopahar na bhaye mujhe
aur mere mitr dhyan rakhen :)
vahi to sabase jyada hai nuktachin mera
jo muskura ke hamesha gale lagaye mujhe
ye mushayara to sanbhavatah nabbe ke dashak ke uttarardh ka hai. Qateel ke bare men itana padane ke bad m pathakon men sahaj utsukata jag uthi hogi ki 'mohabbaton ka ye shayar ' apani javani men kaisa dikhata hoga ? mere pas yuva Qateel ki koee tasavir to nahin par prakash pandit ka ye shabd chitra, jaroor unaki shakl-o-soorat ka khaka aapake jehan men khinchane men safal hoga, ऍsa mujhe yakin hai. prakash pandit sahab bade hi majahiya lahaje men yuva Qateel ke bare men likhate hain...
".....Qateel’ shifaee jati ka pathan hai aur ek samay tak gend-balle, raikata, lungiyan aur kulle bechata raha hai, chungikhane men muharriri aur bas-kampaniyon men buking-klarki karata raha hai to usake she’ron ke loch-lachak ko dekhakar aap avashy kuchh der ke liye sochane par vivash ho jayenge. is par yadi kabhi aapako use dekhane ka avasar mil jaye aur aapako pahale se maloom n ho ki vah ‘Qateel’ shifaee hai, to aaj bhi aapako vah shayar ki apeksha ek aisa klark najar aayega jisaki sau sava sau ki tanakhvah ke pichhe aadhe darjan bachche jine ka sahara dhoondh rahe hon. usaka kad maujoon hai, nain-naksh maujoon hain. bal kale aur ghungharale hain. gol chehare par tikhi moonchhen aur chamakili aankhen hain aur vah hamesha ‘taee’ ya ‘bo’ lagane ka aadi. fir bhi n jane kyon pahali najar men vah aisa theth panjabi najar aata hai jo abhi-abhi lassi ke kuhani-bhar lambe do gilas pikar dakar lene ke bare men soch raha ho.
pahali najar men vah jo bhi najar aata ho, do-char najaron ya mulakaton ke bad badi sundar vastavikata khulati hai-ki vah dakar lene ke bare men nahin, apani kisi premika ke bare men soch raha hota hai-us premika ke bare men jo use virah ki aag men jalata chhod gaee, ya us premika ke bare men jise in dinon vah pooja ki sima tak prem karata hai. ......."
oopar ki baton ko samajhane ke liye mujhe kuchh aur kahane ki jaroorat nahin bas is ghazal ko ek bar pad len,
meri zindagi, tu firak hai ,vo ajal se dil men makin sahi
vo nigah-ye-shauk se door hain ,rag-ye-jan1 se lakh karin sahi
1 shareer ki mukhy raktavahini
hamen jan deni hai ek dina, vo kisi tarah vo kahin sahi
hamen aap khinchiye var para, jo nahin koee to hamin sahi
sar-ye-toor sar-ye-hashr ho, hamen intajar kabool hai
vo kabhi milen vo kahin milen, vo kabhi sahi, vo kahin sahi
na ho un pe mera bas nahin, ki ye aashiki hai havas nahin
main unhin ka tha, main unhin ka hoon, vo mere nahin, to nahin sahi
mujhe baithane ki jagah mile, meri aaraju ka bharam rahe
teri anjuman men agar nahin , teri anjuman ke karin sahi
tera dar to hamako na mil saka, teri rahagujar ki jamin sahi
hamen sajada karane se kam hai jo vahan nahin to yahin sahi
use dekhane ki jo lau lagi to Qateel dekh hi lenge ham
vo hajar aankh se door ho, vo hajar pardanashin sahi
mainne Qateel sahab ki aavaj men ye ghazal khojane ki koshish ki par nahin mili to apani aavaj men ise padane ki koshish ki hai. is ghazal ko padate vakt mujhe ek alag tarah ka pravah aur junoon ka ehasas huaa isaliye ye andaja laga sakata hoon ki ise likhane vala apani mohabbat men kis kadar junooni raha hoga.
