Manoj Bhawuk ki likhi kitab 'tasveer jindagi ke' ke baare men pichhali post men mainne aapako bataya tha ki is kitab ki adhikaansh ghazalon men unake aas paas ka samaj jhalakta hai. zahir hai koi bhi gazalakaar apani jindagi se jo anubhav sametata hai vahi apani ghazalon men udelta hai.
khud manoj apane ek sher men kahate hain..
dukh darad ya hansi ya khushi, je bhi duniya se hamara milal
oohe duniya ke sanupat hin, aaj deke ghazal ke sakal
samajik samasyaaon par unake ashaaron ki charcha to main pahle kar hi chuka hoon par garibon ki haalat par apane is sankalan men ek poori ghazal likhi hai. deen dukhiyon ke dard ko apani is chhoti bahar ki ghazal men vo kuch yoon vyakt karte hain..
dnse umr bhar, deg deg par
ban ke karit saanp garibi
heet meet ke darshan durlabh
jab se lelas chhaap garibi
janm karj men mrityu karj men
aisan chnpalas chaanp garibi
ham sabhi apani jindagi men kabhi hatasha ke daur se gujarte hain to kabhi din hanste khelte nikal jaate hain. manoj ki shayari men ye dono manahsthitiyan ujagar hui hain. kabhi jindagi ko vo bojh ki tarah vo kheenchta sa anubhav karte hain
kuchhuo kahan ba aapan, jhootho ke ba bharam
saanso udhar jisan laage kabo kabo,
doli i deh laage, dulhin i aatma
jinagi kahaar jisan laage kabo kabo
to kabhi use vo prem ke rang se sarabor paate hain..
ab t har vakat sang tahare ba
dil ke kagaj, par rang tahare ba
tohase alaga bala dahab kaise
dhaar tahare, patang tahare ba
par ye jaroor gaur karne ki baat hai ki jindagi ki jo tasveer manoj ne apani is pustak men dikhaai hai usamen pyar ka rang baki rangon ki tulna men fika hai. haan, ye jaroor hai ki manoj ki gazalen sirf samajik asamaanta ka aaina bhar nahin hain par saath hi saath vo unase ladane ka hausla bhi dilati hain. misaal ke taur par unake likhe in ashaaron par gaur kijie.. kya josh jagati hain ik aam jan ke man men !
hokhe agar jo himmat kuchhuo pahaar nikhe
man men j than lin kahanvaan bahaar nikhe
kuch log neek baate tabahin tikal ba dharati
kise kahin ki kehu par aitabaar naikhe
ya fir hamen jeevan men jujhaaru hone ka ka sandesh deti in panktiyon ko dekhen..
har kadam jeeye mare ke ba ihan
saans jabale ba lade ke ba ihan
jindagi toofaan men ego diya
timatimate hin jare ke ba ihan
uhe aag sabka jigar men ba, par raah ba sabka juda
kehu kar rahal ba dhuaan dhuaan, kehu de rahal ba roshni
to kahin vo sanvaad ke raaste aapasi sanshay ko mitane ki baat kahate hain..
bhed man ke man men rakhab kab le anise jaant ke
aaj khul ke baat kuch ruro kahin kuch hamahoon kahin
ghar basal alage alag, bakir ka na i ho sake
rura dil men ham rahin aur hamara men rura rahin
Manoj ki lekhani aaj ki jeevan shaili aur khaaskar internet par hamari badhati nirbharta par badi khoobasarati se chali hai. urdu ki mazahiya shayari ke andaaj men unhonne 'internet' par jo bhojapuri ghazal kahi hai usake kuch sher to vakai kamaal ke hain. kuch ashaaron ki baangee dekhiye..
kisan kisan kaam nadhail baate internet par
maus dhile log dhadhail baate internet par
bedekhal bejanal chehara se bhi pyar mohabbat ab
ajabe gajabe mantra marail baate internet par
jahan oopar ka sher soshal netavarking ke prati hamare badhate khinchaav ko dikhata hai to vahin ye sher internet ki samajik sveekriti ko maze maze men poori kamayabi se ubharta hai
saali se jab poochhanin, kaho doolha katahoon set bhayil
kahali u muskaat, khojail baate internet par
is ghazal ke apane sabhi pasandida ashaaron ko bol kar padhne ka aanand hi kuch aur hai. to lijie suniye ise padhne ka mera ye prayas..
Assi prishthon ke is ghazal sangrah men Manoj Bhavuk ki 72 ghazalen hain. aur jaisa ki mainne pichhali post men bhi kaha ki agar aap ek ghazal premi hain aur bhojapuri bhasha ki jaanakari rakhte hai to maatra 75 rupaye ki ye pustak aapke liye hai. ise hind yugm ne utkrisht chhapaai ke saath baajaar men utara hai. is pustak ko kharidne ke liye aap sampadak@hindyugm.com par i mel kar sakte hain ya mobail par +91 9873734046 aur +91 9968755908 par sanpark kar sakte hain.
aur haan aapako ye pustak charcha kaisi lagi ye jaroor bataiyega.
khud manoj apane ek sher men kahate hain..
dukh darad ya hansi ya khushi, je bhi duniya se hamara milal
oohe duniya ke sanupat hin, aaj deke ghazal ke sakal
samajik samasyaaon par unake ashaaron ki charcha to main pahle kar hi chuka hoon par garibon ki haalat par apane is sankalan men ek poori ghazal likhi hai. deen dukhiyon ke dard ko apani is chhoti bahar ki ghazal men vo kuch yoon vyakt karte hain..
dnse umr bhar, deg deg par
ban ke karit saanp garibi
heet meet ke darshan durlabh
jab se lelas chhaap garibi
janm karj men mrityu karj men
aisan chnpalas chaanp garibi
ham sabhi apani jindagi men kabhi hatasha ke daur se gujarte hain to kabhi din hanste khelte nikal jaate hain. manoj ki shayari men ye dono manahsthitiyan ujagar hui hain. kabhi jindagi ko vo bojh ki tarah vo kheenchta sa anubhav karte hain
kuchhuo kahan ba aapan, jhootho ke ba bharam
saanso udhar jisan laage kabo kabo,
doli i deh laage, dulhin i aatma
jinagi kahaar jisan laage kabo kabo
to kabhi use vo prem ke rang se sarabor paate hain..
ab t har vakat sang tahare ba
dil ke kagaj, par rang tahare ba
tohase alaga bala dahab kaise
dhaar tahare, patang tahare ba
par ye jaroor gaur karne ki baat hai ki jindagi ki jo tasveer manoj ne apani is pustak men dikhaai hai usamen pyar ka rang baki rangon ki tulna men fika hai. haan, ye jaroor hai ki manoj ki gazalen sirf samajik asamaanta ka aaina bhar nahin hain par saath hi saath vo unase ladane ka hausla bhi dilati hain. misaal ke taur par unake likhe in ashaaron par gaur kijie.. kya josh jagati hain ik aam jan ke man men !
hokhe agar jo himmat kuchhuo pahaar nikhe
man men j than lin kahanvaan bahaar nikhe
kuch log neek baate tabahin tikal ba dharati
kise kahin ki kehu par aitabaar naikhe
ya fir hamen jeevan men jujhaaru hone ka ka sandesh deti in panktiyon ko dekhen..
har kadam jeeye mare ke ba ihan
saans jabale ba lade ke ba ihan
jindagi toofaan men ego diya
timatimate hin jare ke ba ihan
uhe aag sabka jigar men ba, par raah ba sabka juda
kehu kar rahal ba dhuaan dhuaan, kehu de rahal ba roshni
to kahin vo sanvaad ke raaste aapasi sanshay ko mitane ki baat kahate hain..
bhed man ke man men rakhab kab le anise jaant ke
aaj khul ke baat kuch ruro kahin kuch hamahoon kahin
ghar basal alage alag, bakir ka na i ho sake
rura dil men ham rahin aur hamara men rura rahin
Manoj ki lekhani aaj ki jeevan shaili aur khaaskar internet par hamari badhati nirbharta par badi khoobasarati se chali hai. urdu ki mazahiya shayari ke andaaj men unhonne 'internet' par jo bhojapuri ghazal kahi hai usake kuch sher to vakai kamaal ke hain. kuch ashaaron ki baangee dekhiye..
kisan kisan kaam nadhail baate internet par
maus dhile log dhadhail baate internet par
bedekhal bejanal chehara se bhi pyar mohabbat ab
ajabe gajabe mantra marail baate internet par
jahan oopar ka sher soshal netavarking ke prati hamare badhate khinchaav ko dikhata hai to vahin ye sher internet ki samajik sveekriti ko maze maze men poori kamayabi se ubharta hai
saali se jab poochhanin, kaho doolha katahoon set bhayil
kahali u muskaat, khojail baate internet par
is ghazal ke apane sabhi pasandida ashaaron ko bol kar padhne ka aanand hi kuch aur hai. to lijie suniye ise padhne ka mera ye prayas..
Assi prishthon ke is ghazal sangrah men Manoj Bhavuk ki 72 ghazalen hain. aur jaisa ki mainne pichhali post men bhi kaha ki agar aap ek ghazal premi hain aur bhojapuri bhasha ki jaanakari rakhte hai to maatra 75 rupaye ki ye pustak aapke liye hai. ise hind yugm ne utkrisht chhapaai ke saath baajaar men utara hai. is pustak ko kharidne ke liye aap sampadak@hindyugm.com par i mel kar sakte hain ya mobail par +91 9873734046 aur +91 9968755908 par sanpark kar sakte hain.
aur haan aapako ye pustak charcha kaisi lagi ye jaroor bataiyega.
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