Gopal Das Neeraj ke kuchh pasandeeda 'Muktak'

Gopal Das Neeraj ki kavitaon aur anki kuch pasandida gajalon ko pahle bhi pesh kar chuka hoon. par Neeraj ka kavya sansaar unki kavitaon aur ghazalon tak hi seemit nahin hai. urdu rubaaiyon ke andaaj men unhonne jo chand panktiyan likhin unhonne usako 'muktak' ka nam diya. aur kya kamaal ke muktak likhe hain Gopal Das Neeraj ji ne..

prasiddh kavya sameekshak sherajng garg ne Neeraj ke muktakon ki lokapriyata ke baare men likhte hain..

Neeraj ke muktak behisaab saraahe ge. iska ek kaaran Neeraj ki mili juli ganga jamuni bhasha thi. jise samajhne ke liye shabdakosh ulatne ki jaroorat nahin thi. ismen hindi ka sanskar tha to urdu ki zindadili in donon khoobiyon ke saath Neeraj ke andaje bayan ne apana hunar dikhaya aur unake muktak bhi geetikaon ke samaan yaadgaar aur marmasparshi ban ge.

aaj Neeraj ke likhe apane pasandida muktakon se aapaka parichay karata hoon. aasha hai ye aap ko bhi utne hi pasand aaenge jitane mujhe aate hain...

(1)

kafan badha to kis liye nazar too dabadaba gai?

singar kyon saham gaya bahaar kyon laja gai?

n janm kuch n mrityu kuch bas itani sirf baat hai ‌

kisi ki aankh khul gai, kisi ko nind aa gai.

(2)

khushi jisane khoji vah dhan le ke lauta,

hansi jisane khoji chaman le ke lauta,

magar pyar ko khojane jo chala vah

n tan le ke lauta, n man le ke lauta.

(3)

rat idhar dhalti to din udhar nikalta hai

koi yahan rukta to koi vahan chalta hai

deep au patnge men fark sirf itana hai

ek jalke bujhta hai, ek bujhake jalta hai

(4)

ban ge hukkaam ve sab joki beimaan the,

ho ge lidar ki dum jo kal talak darabaan the,

mere malik ! aur bhi to sab hain sukhi tere yahan,

sirf ve hi hain dukhi jo kuch n bas insan the.

(5)

chhedane par maun bhi vachal ho jata hai, dost !

tootne par aaina bhi kaal ho jata hai dost

mat karo jyada havan tum aadami ke khoon ka

jalke kala koyla bhi lal ho jata hai dost !

chalte chalte gopal das Neeraj dvara apani kavya rachanaaon par likhi baat uddhrit karana chahoonga

jab likhne ke liye likha jata hai tab jo kuch likha jata hai usaka nam hai gadya. par jab likhe bina n raha jaaye aur jo khud khud likh jaaye to usaka nam hai kavita. mere jeevan men kavita likhi nahin gai. khud likh likh gai hai, aise hi jaise pahadon par nirjhar aur foolon par oos ki kahani.

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Gopal Das Neeraj ka jeevan darshan : Unke 'Char Vicharon' Ke sath..

Zindagi ko dekhne aur mahasoos karne ke hamare maapadand samay aur hamari soch men ho rahe nirantar vistar se badalte rahate hain. vakat se aage dekh paane ki soch, ek aam manav ki prakriti men nahin hai. darasal hamare apane jeevan men jo ghatit hota rahata hai use hi jeevan ka sach maanane ke liye ham taiyaar baithe rahate hain.

Par jis jeevan darshan ko samajh paane men shayad ham apani poori Zindagi nikaal den use gopal das niraj jaisa saksham kavi chand panktiyon men kaise vyakt kar deta hai ye kavita iska ek sundar udaaharan hai.

Is kavita ke madhyam se niraj is baat ko saral sahaj shabdon men purajor tarike se rakhte hain ki kisi manushya ke liye jeevan ki paribhasha is baat par nirbhar karati hai ki usane ab tak Zindagi ke kin rangon ka svaad chakha hai?

to aaiye jeevan ke prati niraj ke anubhavo se roobaru hote hain unki is kavita char vichaar men...

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jo punya karta hai vah devta ban jata hai,
jo paap karta hai vah pashu ban jata hai,
aur jo prem karta hai vo aadami ban jata hai

(2)
jab mainne prem kiya to mujhe laga jeevan aakarshan hai,
jab mainne bhakti ki tab mujhe laga jeevan samarpan hai,
kintu jab se mainne sevavrat liya
tab mujhe pata chala ki jeevan sabse pahle sarjan hai

(3)
jab main baitha tha to samajhta tha ki jeevan upasthiti hai,
jab main khada tha tab samajhta tha ki jeevan sthiti hai,
kintu jab main chalne laga tab lagne laga, "jeevan gati hai"

(4)
jab tak main pukarta raha
tab tak samajhta raha ki jeevan tumhari aavaaz hai
aur jab main svayam ko pukarne laga
to kahane laga jeevan apani hi aavaaz hai
kintu jis din mainne sansaar ko pukarana shuru kiya hai
us din se mujhe lagne laga hai
ki jeevan meri aur tumhari nahin
un sabaki aavaaz hai jinki ki koi aavaaz hi nahin hai.....

Pata nahin aapane jeevan ke kin roopon ka ab tak anubhav kiya hai . ho sakta hai aapaka nazariya bhinn ho? par saare nazariyon ko mila kar dekhen to shayad sabamen hi jeevan ka koi na koi sach chhupa baitha mile.

Ab oopar ke chitra ko hi len. kisi ko vo kharagosh nazar aaya hoga to kisi ko battakh! par vaastavikta to ye hai ki chitra men ye donon hi roop vidyamaan hai. shayad Zindagi bhi aisa hi ek chitra hai jisamen kai saare chitra samaaye baithe hain...kyoon hai na?

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Kul shahar badahavas hai is tej dhoop mein : Gopal Das Neeraj

Chunavon ke charan dar charan khatm hote ja rahe hain. par naksaliyon ke aatank se jyada soory devata hi apana raudr roop dikhalakar matadataon ko bahar nikalane se rok rahe hain. may mahina shuru hone ke pahale hi garmi ye rang dikhayegi isaki shayad chunav aayog ne bhi kalpana nahin ki hogi. apani kahoon to is jalati tapati garmi mein ghar ya office ke andar dubake rahane ki ichchha hoti hai. fir bhi khane ke samay scooter par bitaye vo das minute hi aag sadrish bahati lapaton se samana kara dete hain.

aise mein agar aur bhi garm ilakon ka daura karana pade to isase badakismati kya hogi. par pichhale hafte karyalay ke kam se chhattisagadh, jharkhand aur orrisa ke garmi se buri tarah jhulasate ilakon se hokar gujarana pada. raste bhar khidaki ki shishe se sunasan kheton aur sadakon ka najara dikhata raha.

pani ki talash mein subah se hi matakiyan bhar kar le jati auratein hon ya ganv ki kachchi sadakon par cycle se school jate bachche sab ke sab mausam ki is mar se trast dikhe. kam se kam ham logon ko to karyalay ka vatanukoolit vatavaran garmi se rahat dila deta hai, par jinhen do vakt ki roti jugadane aur rojamarra ke kamon ke liye bahar nikalana hi hai unake liye is dhoop ko jhelane ke aalava aur chara hi kya hai.

mujhe yad aati hai gopal das 'neeraj' ji ek ek hindi ghazal jo garmi ki is tivr dhoop se jhulasate huye ek din ke halaton ko bakhoobi apani panktiyon mein sametati hai. aap bhi pade ye ghazal jisamein Neeraj garmi se badahavas shahar ki vyatha chitrit karate karate apane samaj ki aarthik vishamata ko bhi rekhankit kar gaye hain...

kul shahar badahavas hai is tej dhoop mein
har shakhs zinda lash hai is tej dhoop mein

hare thake musafiron aavaj do unhen
jal ki jinhen talash hai is tej dhoop mein

duniya ke amano chain ke dushman hain vahi to
ab chhanv jinake pas hai is tej dhoop mein

nangi harek shakh harek fool hai yatim
fir bhi sukhi palash hai is tej dhoop mein

pani sab apana pi gaee khud har koee nadi
kaisi ajib pyas hai is tej dhoop mein

bitegi han bitegi dukh ki ghadi jaroor
neeraj tu kya udas hai is tej dhoop mein

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Chip Chip Ashru Bahaane Waalon ..

Zindagi mein choti badi mayoosi to aati jaati rehti hain. Unhein kitne dinon koyi apne pe haawi hone deta rahe. Neeraj ki ye kavita un logon pe ek teekhaa kataaksh hai jo sapnon ke tootne,kisi ke juda hone ka maatam is terah manaate hain jaise uske aalawa unki zindagi ke koyi maayne hi na hon.

Ye kavita humein prerit karti hai gham ke andheron se bahar nikalne ki ....
Aur is kathor yathaarth ko samajhne kee, ki sangi-sathi, sapne sab choot bhi jayein to ye jeewan phir bhi chalta rehta hai bina ruke bina thame… to kyun na hum bikhre huye tinkon ko jodein aur chal parein jeevan roopi parv ka harsh aur ullaas se swagat karne! ....

Chip Chip ashru bahaane waalon (ashru-tears)
Moti vyarth lutane waalon ! (vyarth –without any purpose)
Kuch sapnon ke mar jane se jeevan nahin mara karta hai

Sapnaa kya hai ? Nayan sez par,
Soya hua aankh ka paani
Aur tootna hai uska jyon
Jage kachchi neend jawani
Geelee umar banaane walon! Doobe bina nahaane waalon
Kuch pani ke bah jane se saawan nahin mara karta hai

Mala bikhar gayi to kya hai
Khud hi hal ho gayi samasyaa (samasya-problem)
Aansoo gar neelaam huye to
Samjho poori huyi tapasyaa
Roothe divas manaane walon! Phati kameez silaane waalon! (divas-day)
Kuch deepon ke bujh jaane se aangan nahin mara karta hai

Khota kuch bhi nahin yahan par
Kewal zild badaltee pothee (pothee –book)
Jaise raat utaar chandani
Pehne subah dhoop ki dhoti
Vastra badal kar aane waalon ! Chaal badalkar jaane waalon! (vastra –cloth)
Chand Khilounon ke khone se bachpan nahin maraa karta hai

Laakhon baar gagriyaan phooteen
Shikan na aayi panghat par
Lakhon baar kishtiyaan doobeen
Chahal-pehal wo hi hai tat par (tat-beach)
Tam ki umra badhaane waalon! Lau ki aayu ghatane waalon ! (tam-darkness)
Laakh kare patjhad koshish par upvan nahin maraa kartaa hai (upvan-garden)

Loot liya maali ne upvan
Luti na lekin gandh phool ki
Toofaanon tak ne cheda par
Khidki band na huyi dhool kee
Nafrat gale lagaane waalon! Sab par dhool udaane waalon
Kuch mukhdon ki naaraazee se darpan nahin maraa karta hai

Chip Chip ashru bahaane waalon (ashru-tears)
Moti vyarth lutane waalon ! (vyarth –without any purpose)
Kuch sapnon ke mar jane se jeevan nahin mara karta hai

Gopal Das 'Neeraj'

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