Pichli post mein aapane Parveen Shaakir kee kuchh rachanae paDhee aur unhe mushaayare me apana kalaam paDhate dekhaa. Ab unakee shaayaree ke safar par aage chale. Ek pseudo naam 'Beena' se likhana shuru karane vaalee Parveen Shaakir urdoo ke mashahoor shaayar ahamad nadeem kaasamee ko aapana guru maanatee thee. 'Khushboo' ke aalaava apane jeevanakaal me unake chaar any kaavy sangrah 'sad barg' (1980), 'Khud Kalaamee' aur 'Inkaar' (1990) aur 'Maah-e-Tamaam' (1994) prakaashit hue. Khushboo ke baare me to pichhalee posT me charcha huee thee, par isake baad paraveen shaakir ne jo kuchh likha vo kuchh kuchh un TooTe khvaabo kee kahaanee jaisa hee lagata hai. in sangraho me priyatam kee sanvedanaheenata aur bevafaee ko unhonne apane kaavy ka mukhy viShay banaaya hai. shaayad isaka kaaraN unake nijee jeevan kee pareshaaniyaa rahee thee. assee ke dashak me Da. naseer ahamad se paraveen ka nikaah hua thaa. par ye rishta jyaada din chal nahee paaya aur antatah inake beech taalaak ho gayaa. is rishte se unake beTe muraad ka janm hua jisane unakee kaavyaatmakata ko ek nee disha dee. unake sangrah khud kalaamee me maatrtv se juDee kuchh najme bhee paDhane ko milatee hai.par khushaboo ke baad unakee lekhanee me maayoosee aur udaasee ka puT baDhata chala gayaa. ye gajal, bahut had tak jeevan kee shaam me TooTe sapano kee choT se aahat paraveen kee aavaaj lagatee hai
aks-e-khushaboo hoon bikharane se na roke koyi
aur bikhar jaoo to, muz ko na sameTe koyi
kaamp uThatee hoon mai soch kar tanahaee me
mere chehare par tera naam na paDh le koyi
jis tarah khvaab ho ge mere reza reza
is tarah se, kabhee TooT kar, na bikhare koyi
ab to is raah se vo shakhs gujarata bhee naheen
ab kis ummeed par daravaaje se zhaanke koyi
koyi aahaT, koyi aavaaj, koyi chhaap nahee
dil kee galiyaan baDee sunasaan hai aaye koyi
paraveen shaakir ke baare me kaha jaata hai ki unhonne apanee kitaabo ko ek aatmakathy ka roop diyaa. unakee kitaabo me kavitao ka kram unake rache jaane ke hisaab se hai. isalie ek aam paaThak bhee sahajata se use ek kishoree (khushaboo) , patnee (sad barg), maa (khudakalaamee) aur ek paripakv stree ke roop me gaDhee rachanao me baanT sakata hai. par ye bhee sahee tha ki unaka aatmakathy ka lahaja itana khula bhee nahee tha ki seedhe-seedhe unakee nijee jindagee ka haal samaza de. apane mahaboob se unhe shikaayate rahee jo rah-rah ke unake lekhan me dikhatee rahee.
ajeeb tarj-e-mulaakaat ab ke baar rahee
tumhee the badale hue ya meree nigaahe.n thee.n
tumhaaree najaro.n se lagata tha jaise mere bajaye
tumhaare ohade kee dene tumhe mubaarak thee.n
so tumane mera svaagat usee tarah se kiya
jo afsaraan-e-hukoomat ke aitakaad me hai
takallufaan mere najadeek aa ke baiTh ge
fir *ehataraam se mausam ka jikr chheD diya
*aadar
kuchh us ke baad siyaasat kee baat bhee nikalee
adab par bhee do chaar tabasare faramae
magar tumane na hamesha ki tarah ye poochha
ki vakt kaisa gujarata hai tera jaan-e-hayaat ?
pahar din kee *ajeeyat me kitanee shiddat hai
ujaaD raat kee tanhaee kya kayaamat hai
shabo kee sust raavee ka tuze bhee shikava hai
gam-e-firaak ke kisse **nishaat-e-vasl ka jikr
ravaayate hee sahee koyi baat to karate.....
*atyaachaar **milan kee khushee
aur ek sher me to unhonne yahaa tak kah diya
kaise kah doo ki muze chhoD diya hai us ne
baat to sach hai magar baat hai rusavaee kee
kuchh jumale paraveen shaakir kee shaayaree me har jagah pae jaate hai. khaasakar khushaboo jisake baare me vo apanee kitaab me kahatee hai ki jab us pyaaree hava ne fool ko chooma......ek khushaboo see saaree fija me fail gee. kaavy samaalochak see. em. neem saahab kahate hai ki prateekaatmak lahaje me paraveen kee kavitao me vo fool aur koyi nahee balki vo khud hai aur vo alhaD hava unakee or khinche ve log, jinake sansarg se unake khyaal shaayaree ke rup me ubhare. ab isee gajal ko le.. kya khoobasoorat matala hai !
teree khushaboo ka pata karatee hai
muz pe ehasaan hava karatee hai
vaise baakee ke sher bhee kuchh kam nahee
dukh hua karata hai kuchh aur bayaa
baat kuchh aur hua karatee hai
*abr barase to inaayat us kee
shaakh to sirf dua karatee hai
*baadal
masala jab bhee uTha chiraago ka
faisala sirf hava karatee hai
aur ye ashaar bhee kamaal ke hai
chehara mera tha nigaahe us kee
khaamoshee me bhee vo baate us kee
mere chehare pe gajal likhatee gee
sher kahatee huee aankhe us kee
baakee roomaanee shaayaro kee tarah paraveen ko bhee chaand, chaandanee aur baarish aakarShit karate rahe. par yahaa dekhie kitane dilakash andaaj me unhonne yahaa chaandanee, neend aur khvaab kee baate kee hai.
chaandanee ...
us roshan zarokhe ko chhoo kar ae, na ae
magar ...
meree palako kee takadeer se neede chunatee rahe
aur us aankh ke khvaab bunatee rahe ...
aur chaand me apanee tanahaee ka aks DhoonDhate hue unhonne kaha
ek se musaafir hai
ek sa mukaddar hai
mai jamee par tanaha
aur vo aasamaa me ...
Baarish se muktalif kuchh najme to yahan likh hi chuka hoon. Yahaan baarish se juDee ek ghajal jo muze behad priy hai ke chand sher pesh kar raha hoon.
baarish huee to phoolon ke tan chaak ho gaye
mausam ke haath bheeg ke *saffaak ho gaye
*khoonee
baadal ko kya khabar ki baarish kee chaah me
kitane buland-o-baala *shajar khaak ho gaye
*peD
juganoo ko din ke vakt pakaDane kee jid kare
bachche hamaare *ahad ke chaalaak ho gaye
*samay
lahara rahee hai barf kee chaadar haTa ke ghaas
sooraj kee shah pe tinake bhee bebaak ho gaye
parveen shaakir kee gajaliyaat ko Mehdi Hasan, Taahira Sayeed, Roona Laila jaise fanakaaro ne apanee aavaaj dee hai. par muze in sabame taahira sayeed kee gaee baadabaa khulane se pahale ka ishaara dekhana... behad pasand hai.
*baadabaa khulane se pahale ka ishaara dekhana
mai samandar dekhatee hoo tum kinaara dekhana
*jahaaj ka paal
yoo bichhaDana bhee bahut aasaa na tha us se magar
jaate jaate us ka vo muD kar dubaara dekhana
kis *shabaahat ko liye aaya hai daravaaje pe chaand
ai **shab-e-hijraa jara apana sitaara dekhana
*soorat **viyog kee raat
aeene kee aankh hee kuchh kam na thee mere liye
jaane ab kya kya dikhaayega tumhaara dekhana
paraveen shaakir ne apanee jindagee us tej chalatee hava see jee, jise apanee manjil par jald se jald pahunchana ho. unake poore jeevan ko dekhe to yuvaavastha me milee khyaati, sivil sarvisej me safalata, shaadee fir beTe muraad ka janm, taalaak, kasTam ke kamishnar pad tak unakee tarakkee, apane jeevan kaal me hee unakee saaree rachanao ka prakaashan sab kuchh itana jaldee hota chala gaya maano unhe pahale se maaloom ho ki unake paas samay jyaada nahee hai. 26 Dec 1994 me kee subah unakee kaar kee bas se Takkar ho jaane kee vajah se unhonne 42 varSh kee umr me achaanak hee is duniya se kooch kar diyaa. par urdoo shaayaree ke premee na unako bhoole hai na unakee rachanao ko. aakhir khud unhonne hee to likha tha
mar bhee jaoo to kahaa log bhula denge
lafz mere hone kee gavaahee denge..........
