शनिवार, मार्च 24, 2007

Faiz Ahmad 'Faiz' : Roomani Kalpanaoon se Yathaarth tak ka Safar

Faiz Ahmad 'Faiz' ki shayari se mera pehla parichay tab hua tha jab aaj se teen saal pehle ek urdu poetry forum mein maine unki ek nazm Gar Mujhe Iska Yakin Ho, Mere Humdum mere dost padhi. Ab nazm to padh lee par pehle stanza ke baad kuch palle nahin pada. Us waqt us forum ki ek sabse senior member hua karti thin Maham Azmi. So humne darte darte unse darkhwast ki kuch madad karein . Aur jis patience se mujh jaise anjaane shaksh ko unhone iska arth samjhaya wo mujhe aaj tak yaad hai.

Waise main ye juroor kahoonga ki agar aap urdu juban mein naya kuch padh rahe hon to kabhie 'Faiz' se mat shuru keejiye. Pehle doosre shayron jaise Bashir Badra, Ahmad Faraz ko padhein aur phir Faiz ko padhein. Faiz ki shayari ke kayi rang hai. Apne shuruaati daur mein ishq ko apna sabse bada prerak batane wale Faiz ke jeevan mein waqt ke sath aise badlaav aaye ki unki shayari ki disha hi badal gayi. Faiz ke jaati zindagi aur unse judi bahut si batein unki maine vistaar se Hindi blog par
yahan
likhi hain.

Wahan par jo nazmein aur ghazalein likhi hain unmein sabse jyada mujhe ye priya hai. Is ghazal ke bare mein mujhe apni forum ki sathi Saharish Khan se pata laga tha aur unhone mujhe iski audio ki link bhi dee thi. Aur sach main Nayyara Noor ki aawaaz mein jab maine ise suna, ye is qadar zehan mein bas gayi ki shayad kabhie nikal na sake.


ham ke Thahare ajanabii itane madaaraato.n ke baad
phir bane.nge aashnaa kitanii mulaaqaato.n ke baad
[madaaraato.n=hospitality, aawaabhagat]

kab nazar me.n aayegii bedaaG sabze* kii bahaar
Khuun ke dhabbe dhule.nge kitanii barasaato.n ke baad
* Hare bhare khule khet

dil to chaahaa par shikast-e-dil ne mohalat hii na dii
kuchh gile-shikave bhii kar lete munaajaato.n ke baad
[munaajaato.n=prayers]

the bahut bedard lamhe.n Khatm-e-dard-e-ishq ke
thii.n bahut bemahar* subahe.n meharabaa.N raato.n ke baad
* dushwaar,kathin

un se jo kahane gaye the "Faiz" jaa.N sadaqaa kiye
anakahii hii rah ga_ii vo bat sab baato.n ke baad

Click here for english translation of this ghazal
Faiz ki shakshiyat, unke kavya vishay, waqt ke sath unki shayari mein aaye badlaav ko unki nazmon aur ghazlon ke sath apni in teen posts mein vyakta karne ki koshish ki hai. Asha hai ye silsila aapko pasand aayega


  1. 'फैज' : राजनीतिक और सामाजिक बदलाव के स्वर ( Bol ke Lab Azaad Hain Tere with audio clip of Tina Sani, Kutte, Sab Taaz Uchhale Jayenge, Cha.nd Roz meri Jaan, faqat Ch.and Roz, Kuch Ishq kiya Kuch kaam kiya-31.3.07)

मंगलवार, मार्च 20, 2007

Jo Tum Aa Jate Ek Baar by Mahadevi Verma !

Chhayavaadi kaviyon se school ke din mein hum sab bahut door bhaagte the. Ek to unki rachnayein sar ke oopar se guzarti thin aur doosre in kavitaaon ke bhaavarth ratne mein sabke haath pair phool jate the. Jayshankar Prasad aur Mahadevi Varma sareekhe kavi humare man mein prem ras ke bajaay aatank jyaada utpanna karte the. Par kitna farq aa gaya hai tab aur ab mein. aaj umra ki is dehleez par inhin kaviyon ki rachnayein man ko pulkit karti hain.

Mahadevi jee kee is rachna ko hi lein...us pyaare se aaguntak ke liye prateeksharat vyakul man se nikalti ye bhaavnayein hriday ko sahajta se chhoo leti hain.
aaj inka bhaavarth batane ke liye master sahab ke notes dekhne kee jaroorat nahin bas dil ke aaine mein jhaank lena hi kaafi hai

Jo tum aa jate ek baar !

Kitni karuna, kitne sandesh
Path mein bichh jaate ban paraag
gaata praanon ka taar taar
aansoo lete ve pad prakhaar !

ha.ns uthte pal mein aadra nayan
dhul jaata oothon ka vishaad
Chha jaata jeevan mein vasant
lut jata chir sanchit viraag

aankhein detin sarvasva vaar
jo tum aa jate ek baar !


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गुरुवार, मार्च 15, 2007

Amrita Preetam ka Kahani Sangrah : ' Do Khidkiyaan'

Amrita Preetam ke gadya lekhan ka aanand shayad hi kisi sahitya premi pathak ne na uthaya ho. Unki lekhan shaili mein ek kavyatmak pravah hai. We apni vichaar badi bebaaki se rakhti hain aur charitron par inki pakad humesha mazboot rehti hai. Do khidkiyan inka ek anootha kahaani sangrah hai jismein kul saat kahaniyaan aur ek lahu upanyaas hain.

Is kahani sangrah ki mein theme auraton ke beech ka aapsi resta hai jise alag alag kirdaaron ke madhyam se unhone bakhoobi ubhara hai. Apne in kahanayon ke bare mein Amrita ji kahti hain
".....Aurat aur mard ka rishta jitna bhi ulja hua ho , phir bhi seedha hota hai. Ek swaabhaawik prapti ka ehsaas uski ragon mein hai. Sirf milan mein nahin virah aur tassuwar mein bhi. Uski buniyaad mein jismaani juroortein hoti hain. Isliye vo apne algaav mein bhi kahin na kahin juda rehta hai, aur uska juda rehna, use badi se badi kurbaani ka bal deta hai.

....par aurat aur aurat ka rishta, maan aur beti ke rishte ko chhod kar, seedha nahin hota balki kisi mard ke madhyam se hota hai. Isiliye usmein ek ki prapti aksar doosre ki apraapti ban jati hai aur isiliye wo ulajh jata hai to uska taar phir haath mein nahin aata. Toot jata hai to usmein dard ka gaurav nahin aata......"

Is kahani sangrah ki vistrit sameeksha iske kuch anshon ke sath maine apne Hindi blog par yahan aur yahan kee hai . Agar istri se judi samvendnaaon ko samjhne aur jaane mein aapki ruchi hai to is kahani sangrah ko avashya padhein.