'kahakashan' men jagjit singh ne tamam shayaron ki bemisal gajalon ko bade dil se apani aavaj se sanvara hai. isamen ek gajal thi unnav ke pas 'mohan' men janmen saiyad fajal ul hasan sahab ki jinhen ye duniya maulana hasarat mohani sahab ke nam se jyada janati hai. maulana vibhajan ke bad men bhi bharat men hi rahe aur maee १९५१ men lakhanaoo men unaka intakal huaa.
to aaiye dekhen kya kahana chaha hai shayar ne apani is roomani si gajal men
raushan jamal-ye-yar se hai anjuman tamam
dahaka huaa hai aatish-ye-gul se chaman tamam
hairat guroor-ye-husn se shokhi se iztarab
dil ne bhi tere sikh liye hain chalan tamam
tumhare is roop se poori mahafil gulashan ho gaee hai thik vaise hi jaise surkh dahakate fool poore bagiche ko raushan kar dete hain. par mujhe hairat hoti hai tere husn ka guroor dekha...ghabara jata hoon teri is madamast chanchalata se. ab to lagata hai ki jamane ke rang dhang dekh toone bhi apane salike badal liye hain.
allah re jism-ye-yar ki khoobi ke khud-b-khud
ranginiyon men doob gaya pairahan tamam
dekho to chashm-ye-yar ki jadu nigahiyan
behosh ik nazar men huee anjuman tamam
aur teri khoobasoorati ke bare men kya kahoon tumhare sharir se lipatakar sare libas aur bhi dilakash lagane lagate hain. rahi bat tumhari aankhon ki, to tumhari hasin najar ke ek var se to poori mahafil hi behosh ho jaye
shirini-ye-nasim hai soz-o-gudaz-ye-mir,
‘hasarata’ tere sukhan pe hai lutf-ye-sukhan tamam
aur makte men to maulana hasarat mohani apani pith thokane ka lobh sanvaran nahin kar pate. pahale to mir ki shayari men vo hava ki si mithasa, dard aur komalata ka jikr karate hain aur fir ye kahane se bhi nahin chookate ki meri shayari sune bina shayari ka poori tarah lutf uthana sanbhav nahin hai.
jagjit ne is gajal ke sirf tin ashaaaron ko is elabam men istemal kiya hai. vahin prasiddh soofi gayika aabida paravin ne apane alag nirale andaj men apane elabam raks e bismil men is gajal ko apana svar diya hai to aaiye pahale sune jagajit sinh ko
Aur yahi ghazal Abida ki aawaaz mein
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to aaiye dekhen kya kahana chaha hai shayar ne apani is roomani si gajal men
raushan jamal-ye-yar se hai anjuman tamam
dahaka huaa hai aatish-ye-gul se chaman tamam
hairat guroor-ye-husn se shokhi se iztarab
dil ne bhi tere sikh liye hain chalan tamam
tumhare is roop se poori mahafil gulashan ho gaee hai thik vaise hi jaise surkh dahakate fool poore bagiche ko raushan kar dete hain. par mujhe hairat hoti hai tere husn ka guroor dekha...ghabara jata hoon teri is madamast chanchalata se. ab to lagata hai ki jamane ke rang dhang dekh toone bhi apane salike badal liye hain.
allah re jism-ye-yar ki khoobi ke khud-b-khud
ranginiyon men doob gaya pairahan tamam
dekho to chashm-ye-yar ki jadu nigahiyan
behosh ik nazar men huee anjuman tamam
aur teri khoobasoorati ke bare men kya kahoon tumhare sharir se lipatakar sare libas aur bhi dilakash lagane lagate hain. rahi bat tumhari aankhon ki, to tumhari hasin najar ke ek var se to poori mahafil hi behosh ho jaye
shirini-ye-nasim hai soz-o-gudaz-ye-mir,
‘hasarata’ tere sukhan pe hai lutf-ye-sukhan tamam
aur makte men to maulana hasarat mohani apani pith thokane ka lobh sanvaran nahin kar pate. pahale to mir ki shayari men vo hava ki si mithasa, dard aur komalata ka jikr karate hain aur fir ye kahane se bhi nahin chookate ki meri shayari sune bina shayari ka poori tarah lutf uthana sanbhav nahin hai.
jagjit ne is gajal ke sirf tin ashaaaron ko is elabam men istemal kiya hai. vahin prasiddh soofi gayika aabida paravin ne apane alag nirale andaj men apane elabam raks e bismil men is gajal ko apana svar diya hai to aaiye pahale sune jagajit sinh ko
Aur yahi ghazal Abida ki aawaaz mein
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