Friday, August 25, 2006

'Mahabhoj' by Mannu Bhandaari

Mannu Bhandarike is upanyas ko pahli baar 1986 mein padha tha.
15 Aug ki chuttiyon mein Ranchi ke thande mahoul ko chor kar Patna jana pada. Wahan ki chipchipati garmi se nizaat paane ke liye idhar udhar niruddeshya bhatak raha tha to sahsa almari se ye pustak jhankti mili .
kahani to ab bilkul yaad nahin thi par ye juroor yaad tha ki pahli baar padhte waqt ye kitaab man ko bahut bhaayi thi. Diary ke pannon mein is kitaab ke naam ke aage maine *** jade the. Aur baad mein jab inhin ka likha upanyas 'Aap ka Bunty' padha tha tab se Mannu ji meri chaheti lekhika ban gayin thin

200 prishthon se bhi kam ki is kitaab ko dubaara padhne mein jyada samay nahin laga aur is baat ki khushi bhi huyi ki is kriti ko dobaara padhne ka mauqa mila. To aaiye aapko le chalein is upanyaas ki katha ki oor !
ye kahani hai vikas ke hashiye se bahar khade ek gaanv Saroha kee.
Ek aisa gaanv jahan bahulya to hai Harijanon ka, par tooti boti hai Jaaton ki !
Yahin maut hoti hai ek padhe likhe Harijan navyuvak Bisu kee.
Waise to Bisu ek samanya naagrik ki tarah gumnaami ki maut mara hota, par param gauravshaali loktantra ki ek parampara ne aisa hone diya. Bisu ki maut ke kuch dinon pahle hi saroha mein upchunaav ki ghoshna ho chuki thi. Aur jaisa ki hota hai virodhi dal hath mein aaye is sunahre mauqe ko kaise jane dete.
Kahani aage badhti hai...
Shuru hoti hai Bisu ki maut ki tahkikaat...
Ya yoon kahein ki ek aam se shakhs ke kareebiyon se kiya gaya kroor mazak !
Raajneetik rassakashi ke is mahoul mein is dukhad maut par saare paksha apni-apni gotiyaan senkte nazar aate hain.
chahe vo mukhyamantri ho jo janta ka dhyaan Bisu ki hatya se hatane ke liye, lok lubhavan yojna ka chaara daaltae hain.....
ya virodhi jo katl ke raajneetik labh ke liye jatigat vaimanasya ko badhane se nahin chookte...
ya aalaa afsar jo case ki tah tak jane waalon ko pratadit kar apni padonnati ke raaste saaf karte chale jaate hain....
ya phir samachaar patra ke maalik jo kaagaz ke permit ko badhwane ke liye raaton-raat sarkaar ki neetiyon ke mukhar prashanshak ban jaate hain.....
Loktantra ke tale ek aisa ghrinit raajneetik chakra jismein pahle ek hatya aatmahatya batayi jaati hai aur baad mein kuch aur .......

Khair wo batana na batana jyada maine nahin rakhta.
Par gaur karne waali baat hai ki 1979 mein likhe is upanyaas ko padhkar aisa nahin lagta ki hum 30 varsh pahle ki isthitiyon se guzar rahe hain. Upanyaas ke har charitra ko aaj bhi hum apne ird gird ghoomta mehsoos kar sakte hain
Ek behad sashakta upanyaas jo humari loktantrik pranaali ki khaamiyon aur nirantar ghatte raajneetik mulyon ki jhalak dikhlakar man ko kachot ..ta hua saa jata hai

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Friday, August 18, 2006

Aankhon Ki Kahani Shayron Ki Jubani : Part-III

Aankhein jitna kuch kahti hain utna hi use chupane ka prayaas bhi karti hain. Aankhon ka ye chal lekin kareebiyon ki pakad mein aa hi jata hai. Ab dekhein Kaifi Aazmi sahab kya kahte hain is bare mein

Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho
kya gam hai jisko chupa rahe ho
Aankhon mein nami hansi labon par
Kya haal hai kya dikha rahe ho
kya gam hai jisko chupa rahe ho


Chup chap jal jane wale logon ko log nirashawaadi ki sreni mein laa khada kar dete hain, par ishqa ki raah mein chalne walon ko duniya ki parwaah kahan !

Tumhrai aankh main gar main kabhi chup chap jal joan
Tum apni aankhon main lekin mera sadma nahi likhna

Meri aankhon main batain hain magar chehre pe gehri chup
Meri aankhain to likh dena mera chehra nahi likhna


Par aankhon ka dard chupana kitna kathin hai uski jhalak Meena kumari ki is nazm mein dikhayi deta hai

Tukade tukade din bita,
dhajji dhajji raat mili,
Jisaka jitana aanchal tha,
utani hi saugaat mili.

Rimjhim boondon me jahar bhi hai,
aur amrit bhi,
Aankhen hans di, dil roya
yah achhi barsat mili.


Aur jab ye dard asahneey ho jaaye to raaj ki baat raaj nahin rah paati. Bakaul Abdul Nadeem Qasmi

Hosla tujh ko na tha mujh se judaa hone ka
warna kaajal teri aankhoN mein na phailaa hota


Par ye kya? Yahan to shayar ishq mein mayoos ho kar bhi apni aankhein nam nahin karna chahta kyunki wo sochta hai ki usse mohabbat ki tauheeen hoti hai!

Karna hi parega zabt-e-gham, peene hi parenge yeh aansoo
Fareyaad-o-fughaan se ay Nadaan, tauheen-e-muhabbat hoti hai
Jo aa ke ruke daaman pe 'Saahil' woh ashk nahee hain paani hai
Jo ashk na chalkay aankhon se us ashk ki qeemat hoti hai


Aur kuch aisi hi soch in janab ki bhi hai

palat kar aaNkh nam karna humaiN hargiz nahiN aata
gaye lamhoN ka ghum karna humaiN hargiz nahiN aata
muhabbat ho to be-had ho jo ho nafrat to bepaya
koi bhi kaam kam karna humaiN hargiz nahiN aata

Par aankhon se hi sab kuch ho jata to kya baat thi ! Baat tab aage badhti hai jab sath hi sath hothon ko bhi mashakkat dee jaye. Par kya har samay aisa ho pata hai ?Are kahan janab…..baraha rishte aankhon ke daayre mein hi simat kar rah jate hain. Gulzar sahab ne kis khoobsurti se is baat ko lafzon ka jaama pahnaya hai ab yahin dekh leejiye

muskurahat se khilee rahtee hai aankho mein kahin
aaur palakon pe ujaale se jhuke rahate hain
hoth kuchh kahate nahin, kaapate hothon pe magar
kitne khamosh se afasaane ruke rahate hain


Bahut si baatein aisi hoti hain jo waqt ki nazakat aur pratikool haalaaton ki wazah se dil ke kone mein dafan karni padti hain. Aankhein unki jhalak bhale dikhla dein par hothon ke darwaze humesha band rahte hain

Sajid Hashmi ka dil ko choota ye sher suniye

Jhalak jate hein akser dard ki manind aankhon se
Mager khamosh rehte hein bayaan hone se darte hein

Kuchal deti hai her hasrat hamari beraham duniya
Dil-e-masoom ke armaan jawaan hone se darte hein


Aur bakaul Amzad Islam Amzad

Jo Aansoo Dil Mein Girtey Hein Woh Aankhoon Mein Nahien Rehtay
Bouhut Sey Harf Aisey Hein Jo Lafzoon Mein Nahien Rehtay

Kitaaboon Mein Likhey Jaatey Hein Duniya Bhar Kay Afsaaney
Magar Jin Mein Haqeeqat Hoo Kitaaboon Mein Nahien Rehtay


To ye to tha aankhon mein dard aur udaasi ka rang ! Lekin aap sab par udaasi ki chadar oodhakar is silsile ka samapan karoon ye achcha nahin lagta. Isliye chalte chalte pesh hai mere priya shayar Gulzar ki ye nazm jo kisi ki pyari aankhon ko zehan mein rakh kar likhi gayi hai

Teri Ankhon Se Hi Khulte Hain Saveron Ke Ufaq
Teri Aankhon Se Hi Band Hoti Hai Ye Seep Ki Raat
Teri Aankhen Hain Ya Sajde Main Hai Masoom Namazi
Palken Khulti Hain to Youn Goonj Ke Uthati Hai Nazar
Jaise Mandir Se Jaras Ki Chale Namnaak Hawaa
Aur Jhukti Hain To Bas Jaise Azaan Khatm Huee Ho
Teri Ankhen, Teri Thahri Huee Gamgeen See Ankhen
Teri Ankhon Se Hi Takhleeq Huee Hai Sachchi
Teri Ankhon Se Hi Takhleeq Huee Hai Ye Hayaat

Ufaq - aasmaan ka kinara, Namnaak - geeli, takhleek - srijan, hayaat- jeewan

Friday, August 11, 2006

Aankhon ki Kahani Shayron ki Jubani : Part-II

Pichli baar batein kar rahe the ki kis terah koyi humari aankhein padh leta hai to man pulkit ho jata hai par baat yahin khatma ho jaati to lutph hi kya tha aankhon ya nazronka ek ishara pyar ki khushboo bikherne ke liye kaphi hai.

Isiliye to Nida Fazli sahab kehte hain

Unse nazarein kya mili, roshan fizayein ho gayin
Aaj jana pyar ki jadoogari kya cheez hai


Khulti julphon ne sikhai, mausamon ko shayri
Jhukti aankhon ne bataya mahkashin kya cheez hai

Ek aashik ke liye in khooburat aankhon ka kya mol hai wo is sher mein dekhiye

Teri aankhon ke siwa duniyaa mein rakhaa kya hai
ye uthaein subha chalae ye jhukain shaam dhalae
mera jeena mera marnaa inhee palkon ke talae


Aur Amjad Islam Amzad to mehboob ki aankhon ke samne hi raat din bitane ko taiyar hain

Soyenge teri aankh ki khilvat mein kisi raat
Saaye mein teri zulf ke jaagenge kisi din


Par suru suru mein apne mehboob ki or aankh utha ke dekhna aasan hai kya!
ab inhein hi dekhiye dil mein pyar ki shama jal chuki hai par ye hain ki abhi bhi nigahein milane se katra rahe hain


Hasrat hai ke Unn ko kabhi nazdeek sey dekhein
Nazdeek hon tou Aankh uthaai nahin jaati
Chaahat pe kabhi bus nahin chalta hai kissi ka
Lag jaati hai yeh Aag, lagaai nahin jaati


Par huzoor ek baar kisi se aankhon hi aankhon mein baat ho bhi jaye to bhi kya kam museebatein hain
Kabhi to unki badi badi aankhon ka kajal dil ki dhadkanon ko badhata hai to kabhi aankhon aankhon mein huyi wo mulakatein dil mein ghabrahat paida karti hain. Pesh hai aisi hi bhav liye humari ye adni si kavish


uski aankhon ka who kajal
jaise gagan mein kale badal
umdein ghumdein haaye, man mera..

aankhon aankhon ki who baatein
who nanhi choti mulakaatein
barbas yaad aa jayein haaye, man mera..


par ye aaturta bhari ghabrahat bhi aisa jaadoo bikherti hai ki apni aankhein bhi kisi aur ki ho jaati hain! yakeen nahin aata to is nazm ko hi dekhein

Kaho, wo dasht kaisa tha?
jidher sab kuch luta aye
jidher aankhien ganwa aye

kaha, seilab jaisa tha, bohat chaha ke bach niklein, magar sab kuch baha aye

kaho, wo Chand kaisa tha?
falak se jo utar aya!
tumhari aankh mein basnay

kaha, wo khawab jaisa tha, nahin tabeer thi us ki, usay ik shab sula aye


Par kya aankhon se sirf prem ki dhara bahti hai? Nahin harghiz nahin. Aankhein jitna dikhati hain utna chupana bhi jaanti hain. Aur phir aansuon ki maan, janani to ye aankhein hi hain na !
Agli kadi mein dekhenge ki kaise karti hain aankhein bhaavon ki lukachipi aur kya hota hai jab un par chadhta hai udaasi ka rang

Wednesday, August 09, 2006

Aankhon ki Kahani : Shayron ki Jubani Part -I

Ankhein uparwale ki dee huyi sabse haseen niyamat hain. Shayad hi zindagi ka koyi rang ho jo in aankhon ke daayre se bahar raha ho. Aur yahi wazah hai ki shayron ne in Aankhon mein basne wale har rang ko , har zazbe ko kitabon ke panne mein utara hai. To is silsile mein aaiye dekhte hain shayron ki jubani in bahut kuch kah jane wali aankhon ki kahani


aaNkhaiN dekheeN to main dekhta rah gayaa
Jaam dou aur donoN hi dou-Aatshaa
aaNkhaiN yaa maikaday ke ye dou baab haiN
aaNkhaiN inko kahoN ya kahooN khwaab haiN


baab-darwaza

aaNkhaiN neechi hueeN to Hayaa ban gaieeN
aaNkhaiN ooNchi hueeN to dua ban gaieeN
aaNkhaiN uTth kar jhukeeN to adA ban gaieeN
aaNkhaiN jhuk kar uTheeN to qazaa ban gaieeN


qazaa - kismat


aaNkhaiN jin main haiN maHV aAsman-o-zameeN
nargissii, nargissi, Surmayii, surmayii.......
nargissii, nargissi, Surmayii, surmayii.......


mahV – Tanmay, talleen

Yun to kehte hain ki ankhain dil ka aaina hotee hein haan par use padhne wala ek samvedansheel , najuk dil chahiye. Ab Khumar Barabankvi sahab ki aankhein dekhiye na pata nahin kisne padh lein

vo jaan hii gaye ke hamen un se pyaar hai
aaNkhon kii muKhbari kaa maza ham se puuchhiye



Kisi ka pyara chehra ho, aur samne ho us chehre ko padhti do ankhein to phir shayri kya rang leti hai ye kissa suna rahi hain Parveen Shakir

cheharaa meraa thaa nigaahen us kii
Khaamushii men bhii vo baaten us kii

mere chehare pe Gazal likhatii gaiin
sher kahatii hui aaNkhen us kii


Kabhi to aankhein kisi ki yaad se khil uthti hain..

teri aankhoN meiN kisi yaad ki lau chamki hai
chand nikle to samandar pe jamaal aata hai


to kabhi kisi ke paas na hone ka gham unhein nam kar deta hai.
shaam se aaNkh mein namii si hai
aaj phir aap kii kamii si hai


Par aankhon ki ye bhasha har kisi ke palle nahin padti. Agar aisa nahin hota to Nazeer Banarsi ko bhala ye kyun kehna padta

Meri be-juban aankhon se, gire hain chand katare,
Woh samajh sake to aasun, na samajh sake to pani


Ab apne mehboob se inhein bhi to yahi shikayat hai

pather mujhay kahta hai mera chaahnay waala
Mein mom hon uss nay mujhay choo ker nahi dekhaa


woh meray masaayil ko samajh hi nahi saktaa
jiss nay meri aankhon mein samander nahi dekhaa



Par aisa bhi nahin hai ki is samandar ko mehsoos karne walon shayron ki kami hain.
Amzad Islam Amzad sahab to iski gahrayi mein utarna chahte hain…..


jaatii hai kisii jheel ki gehraaii kahaN tak
aaNkhoN maiN terii doob ke dekaiN ge kisi din



to Faraz apni aakhiri hichki in aankhon ke samandar mein lene ki khwahish rakhte hain

doob jaa unn Hasseen aaNkhoN main Faraz
baRaa Haseen samandar hai khud.khshii ke liey


Aur in hazraat ka khayal bhi koyi alag nahin

apani aaNkho. ke samu.dar men utar jaane de
tera mujarim huN mujhe Dub ke mar jaane de


To huzoor aaj ke liye to bas itna hi…. Aankhon ki ye daastaan to abhi chalti rahni hai kyonki :p

inn aNkhoN ki mastii ke mastaaney hazaroN haiN
inn aNkhoN se waabasta afsaaney hazaroN haiN
ek sirf hi hami mae ko aNkhoN se pilatey haiN
kehnay ko to duniya main , maekhaney hazaroN haiN

Tuesday, August 01, 2006

Bhale Dinon ki Baat Hai, Bhali si Ek Shakl Thi..

Ahmad Faraz Pakistan ke mashhoor shayar hain jo Bharat mein bhi utne hi chaav se padhe jate hain. Bhala inki likhi ghazal Ranjish hi sahi kis ghazal premi na nahin suni hogi. Aaj unki ek halki phulki nazm pesh-e -khidmat hai jo kuch saal pehle sarhad paar ke ek sathi ne poetry forum mein post ki thi. Zindagi ke kisi mukaam par ek shakhsh se milne aur bichudne ki ye seedhi sachchi daastan dil ko chooye bagair nahin rah pati.


bhale dinoN ki baat hai
bhali si aik shakl thi
na ye ki husn-e-taam ho
na dekhne mein 'Aam si

na ye ki woh chale to
kahkashaaN si rahguzar lage
magar woh saath ho to
phir bhala bhala safar lage

koi bhi rut ho us ki chchab
fiza ka rang-o-roop thi
woh garmiyoN ki chchaaoN thi
woh sardiyoN ki dhoop thi

na muddatoN judaa rahe
na saath subh-o-shaam ho
na rishta-e-wafa pe zid
na ye ki izn-e-'Aam ho

na aisi Khush libasiyaaN
ki saadgi gila kare
na itni be takallufi
ki aaina haya kare

na aashiqi junoon ki
ki zindagi 'azaab ho
na is qadar kaThor pan
ki dosti Kharaab ho

suna hai aik 'Umr hai
mu'Amilaat-e-dil ki bhi
visaal-e-jaaN fiza to kya
firaaq-e-jaaN gusal ki bhi

so aik roz kya hua
wafa pe bahas chchiD gayi
maiN ishq ko amar kahooN
woh meri zid se chiDh gayi

maiN ishq ka aseer tha
woh ishq ko qafas kahe
ki umr bhar ke saath ko
woh bad-taraz-hawas kahe

"shajar hajar nahin ki ham
hamesha pa ba gul raheN
na Dor haiN ki rassiyaaN
gale main mustaqil rahaiN

maiN koi painting nahiN
ki aik frame meiN rahooN
wahi jo man ka meet ho
usi ke praim meiN rahooN

tumhari soch jo bhi ho
maiN is mizaaj ki nahiN
mujhe wafa se bair hai

ye baat aaj ki nahiN"

na us ko mujh pe maan tha
na mujh ko us pe za'Am hi
jo 'ahad hi koi na hoi
to kya gham-e-shakistagi

so apna apna raasta
hansi Khushi badal diya
woh apni raah chal paDi
main apni raah chal diya

bhali si aik shakl thi
bhali si us ki doosti
ab us ki yaad raat din
nahin, magar "kabhi kabhi"


Ye kabhie kabhie wali baat is baat ko purjor andaaz mein rakhti hai ki yadein dhoomil ho sakti hain, dab sakti hain par mar nahin saktin.


देवनागरी में पढ़ने के लिये यहाँ क्लिक करें ।