Saturday, September 03, 2005

Jo Beet Gayi So Baat Gayi...by Bachchan

Ye poetry humne tab padi thi jab class IX mein the. Aur us samay se aaj tak ye apni bheeni bheeni khushboo liye hamare zehan mein samayi hai. Aur yakeen maniye aaj bhi jab koi purani baat dil ko bojhal karti hai to is kavita ki ek khurak man mein ek sfoorti si paida kar deti hai, ek sambal sa pradan karti hai

Ek sitara ....
Jo humesha ankhon ke saamne raha ...
Jiske bare mein kitne sapne sajoye the kavi ne ...
Achanak hi wo ambar mein vileen ho gaya , kho gaya ...
Bach gayin to uski yadein aur ek shunyata ...
Aur uski yaad mein jo kavita phooti Bachchan ki lekhni se wo aapke saamne hai…..

Jeevan mein ek sitara tha
Maana woh behad pyara tha
Woh doob gaya to doob gaya
Ambar ke aanan ko dekho
Kitne iske tare toote
Kitne iske pyare chhoote
Jo chhoot gaye phir kahan mile
Par bolo toote taron par
Kab ambar shok manata hai

(Ambar –aasmaan , Shok -dukhi hona)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ....

Jeewan mein tha who ek kusum
The us pe nitya nyochawar tum
Wo sookh gaya to sookh gaya
Madhuwan ki chaati ko dekho
Sookhi kitni iski kaliyan
Jo murjhai phir kahan khili
Par bolo sookhe phoolon pe
Kab madhuvan shok manata hai ?

(Kusum-flower , Nitya-hamesha, nyochawar- dedicated, madhuvan- gulshan)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Jeewan mein madhu ka pyala tha
Tumne tan man de daala tha
Woh toot gaya to toot gaya
Madiralay ka aangan dekho
Kitne pyaale hil jaate hain
Gir mitti mein mil jate hain
Jo girte hain kab uthte hain
Par bolo toote pyalon mein kab madiralay pachtata hai ?

(Madhu-sharab, madiralaya-sharabkhana, pachtana-repent)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Mridu mitti ke hain bane huye
Madhu ghat phoota hi kartein hain
Laghu jeewan leke aaye hain
Pyale toota hi karte hain
Phir bhi madiralay ke andar
Madhu ke ghat madhu ke pyale hain
Jo madakta ke mare hain
Wo madhu loota hi karte hain
Wo kachcha peene wala hai
Jiski mamta ghat pyalon par
Jo sachche madhu se jala hua
Kab rota hai chillata hai?

(Mridu-soft, ghat-pyaala, laghu- chota, madakta-masti, mamta-prem)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ......

32 comments:

PuNeEt said...

Me first not bad...

I forgot that u r alive on Hindi blog...

Read all your posts below

Nice one...

This poem from Bachanji is one of my all time favs...
We had this in our Hindi syllabus during 10th... and i used to love it...

The one by faiz was a good1 too
but too tough for me...
gosh I dont know that much of urdu..

take care
cheers

Gumnaaaam said...

Kab ambar shok manata hai...!

Waah kya khoob pesh kash hai janab....buhaat hi khoob...
munir niyaazi sahab ka vo sher yaad agaya...


jaanataa huu.N ek aise shaKhs ko mai.n bhii 'Munir'
Gam se patthar ho gayaa lekin kabhii royaa nahii.n

Dawn....सेहर said...

wha manish...ye kya...wahan quiz mein phansaye rakha aur yahan chori chori ...:)

mere bachpan ki kaksha ki yaadein taazi kar deen...aksar hindi ke uccharan saaf aur acchi hone ki wajah se hamari adhyapika humein kavita ko parhne ke liye protsahit kartin thin....aaj woh sundar pal jaise aankhon ke saamne aagaye :)

shukriya dost!!!

Divya said...

Jeewan mein tha who ek kusum
The us pe nitya nyochawar tum
Wo sookh gaya to sookh gaya
Madhuwan ki chaati ko dekho


waah manish... just love reading ur posts :)

Manish said...

Ye blog kuch thahar juroor gaya tha Puneet par ab to Quiz khatma huyi ! Waise bhi is blog pe jo kuch hai wo dil ke jyada kareeb hai!
Khushi huyi jaan ki tumhein bhi ye poem utni hi pasand hai!

Manish said...

shukriya chutki I particularly love these lines


Mridu mitti ke hain bane huye
Madhu ghat phoota hi kartein hain
Laghu jeewan leke aaye hain
Pyale toota hi karte hain
Phir bhi madiralay ke andar
Madhu ke ghat madhu ke pyale hain
Jo madakta ke mare hain
Wo madhu loota hi karte hain
Wo kachcha peene wala hai
Jiski mamta ghat pyalon par
Jo sachche madhu se jala hua
Kab rota hai chillata hai?

(Mridu-soft, ghat-pyaala, laghu- chota, madakta-masti, mamta-prem)

Manish said...

Hmmmmm DON we have shared it all! Infact my first interaction with u was related to Bachchan's Madhushala ! Sharing few lines with u again

ek baras meiN ek baar hee jagti holi kee jwaala
ek baar hee lagti baaji jalti deepoN kee maala
duniya waaloN kintu kisi din aa madiraalay meiN dekho
din meiN holi raat diwaali roz manaati madhushaala

Manish said...

Thx Divya! Nice to know that u liked this poetry from bachchan sahab!

word_smith said...

nice poem.we also had to read it.


by the way;i see you have read gunahon ka devta.it is one of the best love stories i have ever read.have yo read maila aanchal?

Manish said...

Welcome to my blogword-smith!

Yes i have read Maila Aanchal & liked it too! The regional flavour of Purnia is the most noticable point of Renu's work!

Munish said...

Just discovered your blog Manish. This poem by Bachchan ji is one of my favourites.
You can see its hindi version on my blog : http://hindipoetry.blogspot.com/2005/04/blog-post_111474270611664551.html

Manish said...

Hi Munish
Went to the link provided by you!
but i have win 98 which is without unicode support so I couldn't see any thing.:(
I will definitely visit ur blog from office where I have XP.
Love to found a mate with interest in Hindi & Urdu poetry.

Keep Visiting!

Anonymous said...

Did we have Bachhan's 'Madhushala' poem in our 10th grade? I did my 10th in 1992. I had a bet with my brother that we did and he says 'no'.

Aman said...

this kavita by mr. bacchhan is one of my favourites , i first read it when i was in class 9 and still i rank it as the best. he was truly an artist.

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Cruise said...

best

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deepanshi p.chopra said...

hey thanks....jitne baar phado utne baar naye lagte hai yeh kavita.....i love it a lot....

Manish said...

Bilkul sahi kaha deepanshi ji aur is post mein dekhiye ki Faiz Ahmad Faiz sahab ne bhi aise hi vichar apni is nazm mein prastut kiye hain

http://manishkmr.blogspot.com/2005/08/sheeshon-ka-masiha-koyee-nahiin-by.html

Kim said...

i was searching for this poem in google and ended up in ur blog...well i dont have much flattery words to express my complinets in Hindi...All i can sya is Sukriya!!! asise blog ke liye...i will keep visiting ur blog...:)

Manish said...

U also express yourself quite well Kim. Chalo achcha laga jaankar ki tumhari khoj mere is blog par samapt huyi ;).

Thx for ur kind words. Keep visiting !

Ashwini said...

Hi to the one who has posted this poem.I bet you must have studied from a central school or CBSE syllabi school...cos even I had this poem in our Hindi subject in IX th std..there was a seperate book for hindi poems and the poets (Jivani)...I liked this poem a lot since I have read it..its not only very well expressed but also very practical in our approach to the high and low points in our Life and our attitude towards them...seriously whats the point in cribbing for anything in our life,everything is a part of our life and has some purpose so just accept,learn and move forward...thats one of the lessons this poem tries to convey to its readers -:)

Thanks for posting it here...

Cheers,
Ashwini

Manish said...

You are absolutely correct about the philosophy expressed in the poem. Its so true that this poem always stays in our heart.

But u lost the bet.. I did my highschool from state board & not CBSE :)

devanshu said...

Yaar... as far as my memory goes...in the first para one line is missing " Jo chooth gaye fir kahan mile"...correct me if i m wrong..as this one is my favourite poem till date...

Manish said...

Shukriya, Devanshu...wo pankti ghalti se chhoot gayi thi, maine edit kar diya hai

Te..Re..le..ye...hum hain jiye har ansu piye said...

kavita ke liye ek aur accha manch dekhkar accha laga
jindgi mai rang bharne ki apki koshish sarahniya hai
bahut bahut dhnyabad

please visit
www.manmohanji.blogspot.com
for some new lines

manmohan

gita pandit said...

Great poem...
.I love it....Thanks...

pallavi... said...

bachpan ki school ki yaade judi huyi hain , i am a new member here,and its really great to read these poems once again, i can never forget the lovely times spend in school, punishments of anita mam to learn the poem with gadya,really school days are the wonderful days of life, and we can never get back to it !! it brought tears to my eyes,
thanx

latu said...

hello
i love this poem because its totally base on our life.
this poem teach us too many things... i lov that
thanks

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latu said...

hello puneet.you know what when i was in 10th class,i didn't study hindi subject very deeply bt know i feel i missd this fabulous poem because now i like this poem too much...its totally based on our life like jo choot jate hai un per jyada pachtana nahe chaheye,bes move forward take experiance....know i love this poem ....
thanks