Tere utare huye din tange hain lawn mein ab tak : Gulzar's poetry in Nana Patekar's voice

Do saal pahle ek daure par durgapur gaya tha. Sath mein koee sahakarmi na hone ke karan daftar se vapas aakar shamein gujarana kafi mushkil ho raha tha. Aisi hi ek khali shaam ko koee aur vikalp na rahne ki wajah se ek film dekhani padi thi 'Dus Kahaniyan'.

Durgapur ke naye maltiplex ke uhaal mein us raat mere sath matra saat aath darshak rahe honge. Das alag alag kahaniyon ko ek hi sath prastut karane ke is anoothe prayog ke liye kahaniyon ke chunav mein nirdeshak ko jo satarkta bartani chahiye thi, vo nahin ki gaee.

So das kahaniyon mein teen char ko chhodkar baki kisi gat ki nahin thi. Khair ab nabbe rupaye kharch kiye the to main film ko jhelane ke liye majboor tha, par kamal ki baat ye dekhi ki meri pankti mein ek sajjan aaye aur pahali kahani ko aadha dekhane ke bad aisa soye ki sidhe film khatm hone ke bad chupachap uthe aur chal diye. mainne man hi man socha ki jaroor ye banda apani gharawali se trast hoga varna ek meethi neend ke liye itna kharcha karne ki kya jaroorat thi.

Film mein geet bhi damdaar nahin the. Baad mein ek din net par vicharan kar raha tha to ye pata laga ki Gulzar sahab ne iski das kahaniyon ki script padhkar har kahani par ek nazm taiyar ki hai jise film ke alag alag kalakaron ne apani aavaj mein padha hai.

Das kahaniyon ke geeton ke sath hi nikala album to mujhe jald hi mil gaya par acharaj is bat ka huaa ki film mein in behatarin nazmon ka kisliye istemal nahin kiya gaya. Shayad samay ki kami ek wajah rahi ho.Is blog par is album ki apani char pasandida najmon mein se teen to aapko suna chuka hoon. To aaiye aaj karein kuchh batein 'gubbare' kahani par kendrit Gulzar ki is chauthi nazm ke bare mein jise apana svar diya hai Nana Patekar ne .

Purane din, purani yaden kisi bhi kavi man ki mahattvapoorn khurak hoti hai. Bite huye lamahon mein huee har ik chhoti badi baat ko yaad rakhna to shayad ham mein se kaiyon ka priy shagal hoga. Par un baaton ko shabdon ke canvas par bakhoobi utar pana ki vo seedhe dil ko bindhati chali jaye Gulzar ke hi bas ki baat hai. Nana Patekar jab apani gahari aawaz mein bas itna sa kahte hain

tere utare huye din tange hain lawn mein ab tak
na vo purane huye hain na unka rang utra
kahin se koee bhi sivan abhi nahin udhdi

to hamari apani purani yadon ke kuchh band daravaze to anayas khul hi jate hain. Gulzar ka ye andaz bhi dil ko karib se chhoo jata hai

gilahariyon ko bulakar khilata hoon biskut
gilahariyan mujhe shaq ki nazaron se dekhti hain
vo tere hathon ka mass jaanti hongi...

To sunein Nana Patekar ki aawaz mein ye nazm

Darasal nazmon ko padana bhi ek kala se kam nahin hai Gulzar ko jitna padhna pasand aata hai utna hi unhein sunna. Yahi khasiyat Amitabh ji mein bhi hai. Waise kuchh shabdon ke uchcharan ko agar nazaraandaj kar den to Nana Patekar ne bhi nazm ki bhavanaon ko aatmasat kar ise padha hai.

tere utare huye din tange hain lawn mein ab tak
na vo purane huye hain na unka rang utra
kahin se koee bhi sivan abhi nahin udhdi

ilayachi ke bahut paas rakhe patthar par
zara si jaldi sarak aaya karati hai chhanv
zara sa aur ghana ho gaya hai vo paudha
main thoda thoda vo gamla hatata rahta hoon
fakira ab bhi vahin meri coffee deta hai
gilahariyon ko bulakar khilata hoon biskut
gilahariyan mujhe shak ki nazaron se dekhti hain
vo tere hathon ka mass janati hongi...

kabhi kabhi jab utarti hain cheel sham ki chhat se
thaki thaki si zara der lawnn mein rukkar
safed aur gulabi mussaende ke paudhon mein ghulane lagti hai
ki jaise barf ka tukada pighalata jaye whiski mein
main scarf ..... gale se utar deta hoon
tere utare huye din pahan kar ab bhi main teri mahak mein kaee roz kat deta hoon

tere utare huye din tange hain lawn mein ab tak
na vo purane huye hain na unka rang utra
kahin se koee bhi sivan abhi nahin udhdi

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Mere Mehboob Mere Dost Nahin Ye Bhi Nahin...Mukesh non filmi nazm

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Pichli post mein maine baat kee thi Mukesh ki gaayi is ghazal जरा सी बात पे हर रस्म... kee.aaj usee elabam kee vo najm pesh hai jisakee khoj karate karate aakhirakaar is kaiseT tak pahunch paaya thaa. tab mai inTar me tha . gajalo me dilachaspee jab se baDhee thee, vividh bhaaratee ka ek kaaryakram meree roj kee dinacharya ka abhinn ang ban gaya thaa. vo kaaryakram tha rang tarang jo us jamaane me din ke saaDhe baarah baje aata thaa. aur esee hee ek dupaharee me transistor aan karane ke baad doosare kamare se mukesh kee aavaaj me ye panktiyaa sunee to man ThiThak sa gaya tha...।

na jaane kyoo ye panktiyaa dil me, pooree najm se prthak apana ek alag astitv hee bana gee. aur baraso baad bhee jab-jab vakt ne , jindagee ke mukaam par akela chhoDa to mainne khud ko apane aap se yahee kahate paayaa.

mere mahaboob, mere dost nahee ye bhee nahee

meree bebaak tabiyat ka takaaja hai kuchh aur..

aur shaayad usee kuchh aur kee taalaash aaj bhee badastoor jaaree hai...

is najm ko likhane vaale the shaukat jayapuree saahab jinake baare me muze koee khaas jaanakaaree nahee hai sivae is baat ke ki ve aThaarahavee shataabdee ke ant me ye urdoo shaayaree ke kShitij par chamake. 1916 me shaukat saahab ka intakaal huaa. par kamaal dekhe ki unake gujarane ke 40-50 saal baad, unakee shaayaree ko mukesh ke aalaava talat mahamood aur manna De saahab sareekhe mahaan gaayako ne apanee aavaaj dee.

ye najm 1968 me muralee manohar svaroop ke sangeet nirdeshan me sangeetabaddh kee gee. tabale kee halkee-halkee thaap ke saath baakee saaj sanyojan kuchh is tarah kiya gaya ki shrota ka dhyaan is najm ke bolo se bhaTake nahee.

haa.N mai.n dIvaanaa huu.N chaahuu.n to machal sakataa huu.N
khilaavat-e-husn ke kaanuun badal sakataa huu.n
khaar to khaar hai.n a.ngaaro.n pe chal sakataa huu.n
mere mahabuub mere dost nahii.n ye bhii nahii.n
merii bebaak tabiiyat kaa takaazaa hai kuchh aur

isii raftaar se duniyaa ko guzar jaane duu.N
dil me.n ghuT ghuT ke tamannAo.n ko mar jaane duu.N
terii zulfo.n ko sar-e-dosh bikhar jaane duu.N
ek din chhiin luu.n mai.n azamat-e-baasil kaa junuun

mere mahabuub mere dost nahii.n ye bhii nahii.n merii bebaak tabiiyat kaa takaazaa hai kuchh aur

to.D duu.N to.D duu.N mai.n shaukh se duniyaa kaa khusoom
aur bah jaaye yuu.n hii nafz-e-zaarosIm kaa khuun

gairat-e-ishq ko manzuur tamaashaa hai yahii
merii fitarat kaa mere dost takaazaa hai yahii

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Gulzar's, BIT Mesra aur wo pyara sa nagma...

Pichhle hafte yani 18 August ko Gulzar sahab ka 73 van janmdin tha. Waise to Gulzar ki baatein 'Ek Shaam Mere Naam' par hoti hi rahti hain aur is baat ka praman hai ki ye un se judi is blog ki 25 th post hai. Mere hindi film sangeet ke prati aaranbhik jhukav mein is shakhs ka mahti yogdaan raha hai. College jeevan ke kitne hi rangeen aur ekaaki lamhe unke geeton ke sath kate hain. Aisa hi ek lamha tha aaj se kareeb bees varsh poorv ka jise aaj is avasar par aap sab se bantane ki ikchha ho rahi hai.

Baat 1990 ki hai. Hamein engg. college mein gaye huye 6 mahine beet chuke the yani yoon kahen ki shuruaati do teen mahinon vali ragging ka phase samapt prayah ho gaya tha. Ghar se nikalane ke bad ki pahali pahal aajadi ka asali svad chakhane ka yahi samay tha. yani ab ham aaram se kanlej hanstal se ranchi ke firayalal ke chakkar laga pa rahe the. fursat ke lamahon mein padaee ke aalava naee naee balaon ki vishishtataon ki charcha mein bhi khoob aanand aane laga tha. ऍse mein pata chala ki march ke mahine mein mesara ka salana mahotsav jise vahan beetotsav (Bitotsav) kaha jata hai aaranbh hone vala hai.

Ab apan in karyakramon mein hissa-vissa to nahin liya karte the par sare karyakramon ko dekhne ki ikchha jaroor hoti thi. Aur sabae adhik intazar rahta tha is utsav ki samapti par hone vale sangeet mahotsav ka jis mein poore archestra ke sath pashchaty aur hindi donon tarah ke sangeet ka karykram huaa karta tha. March mahine ki vo raat mujhe kabhi nahin bhoolti. Bahut sare geet gaye ja chuke the par vo lutf abhi tak nahin aaya tha jiski apeksha liye ham khule aakash ke neeche maidan mein do ghante se baithe the. Tabhi hamare senior batch ki do chhatraon ke naam stage par udghoshit kiye gaye. Ham sab ne socha koee yugal geet hoga. Aur fir shuru huaa aasha taee ka gaya vo geet jiske prabhav se main varshon mukt nahin ho paya.

Vo geet tha Gulzar ka likha huaa aur pancham ka sangeet baddh katra katra milti hai, katra katra jine do... Bhavna Bhandari aur B. Sujata ki jodi ne Asha taee ke is ekal geet ko mil kar itani khoobsoorti se nibhaya ki ham raat bhar pagalon ki tarah is geet ko gunagunate rahe.

Agle din chhutti thi par is geet ko fir se sunne ki ichchha itni balvati thi ki nashta karane ke theek baad agali bas se Ranchi is film ki casette kharidane ke liye nikal pade. Ab casette to din tak hostal mein aa gaee par agali samasya thi ki ise bajaya kaise jaye kyoonki mere pas us waqt koee taperecorder to tha nahin. Lihaza baari baari se padosiyon ke daravaje thak thakaye gaye taki ek adad teparikardar udhari par manga ja sake. tisare ya chauthe daravaje par hamari iltija rang laee aur char ghante ke liye hamein taperecorde mil gaya.Phir to ye geet ghanton rewind kar kar ke bajaya gaya. Gulzar ke prati mera anurag aise kaee anubhavon ki badaulat mere dil mein satat palata badhta raha hai. Khair baat ho rahi thi qatra qatra ki...




Darasal geet ko itna khoobsoorat banane mein Gulzar, Pancham aur Aasha ji ki tikadi ka barabar ka hath hai. Kya dhun banaee thi pancham da ne aur apani pyari chahakti chhanachhanati aavaj mein kitani khoobsoorti se nibhaya tha Asha ji ne. Pancham to sangeet mein nit naye prayog karne mein mahir rahe hain. Is geet mein Pancham ne Asha ji ki aavaj ka istemal multi track recording mein is tarah kiya hai ki poore geet mein do aashayen ek sath sunaee deti hai.

To aaiye Gulzar ke likhe shabdon ko mahasoos kijiye Pancham ki adbhut svaralahariyon aur Asha ji ki bahati aavaj mein ...

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qatra qatra milti hai
qatra qatra jine do
zindagi hai, zindagi hai
bahne do, bahne do
pyasi hoon main, pyasi rahne do
rahne do ...

kal bhi to kuchh aisa hi huaa tha
neend mein thi tumne jab chhuaa tha
girte girte bahon mein bachi main
sapane pe panv pad gaya tha
sapnon mein rahne do
pyasi hoon main pyasi rahne do

tum ne to aakash bichhaya
mere nange pairo.n mein zamin hai
pa ke bhi tumhari aarazu hai
ho.. shayad aisi zindagi hasin hai
aarazu mein bahne do
pyasi hoon main ,pyasi rahne do
rahane do, na ...

qatra qatra milti hai....

halke halke kohare ke dhuyein mein
shayad aasaman tak aa gayi hoon
teri do nigahon ke sahare
dekho to kahan tak aa gayi hoon
kohare mein bahne do
pyasi hoon main, pyasi rahane do
rahne do, na ...

qatra qatra milati hai.....

Gulzar ka likha geet to aapane sun liya par unaki likhi najmon ya gajalon ko aapane nahin suna to fir Gulzar ke shabd chitron mein doobane ka mauka to kho diya aapane. isaliye chalate chalate unase judi meri tin pasandida kadiyan bhi padate sunate jaiye. main janata hoon ki agar aapane inhen pahale nahin suna to bar bar jaroor sunana chahenge...

• Bahut din ho gaye sachchi teri aawaz ki bauchhar mein bhinga nahin hoon main.. Anupam Kher ki aawaz mein
• Tere ishq mein badal dhune mausam bune...Rekha Bharadvaj ki aawaz mein
• Raat bhar bujhate huye rishte ko tapa hamane khud Gulzar ki aavaj mein
• Khumar- e -gham hai mahakti fiza mein jite hain.... Jagjit singh ki aavaj mein

Gulzar sahab ke janmadin par meri yahi kamana hai ki ve isi tarah apane kalam ki vilakshanata se mamooli shabdon mein bhavon ke jaduee rang bharate rahein aur hamein yoon hi apani rachanaon se achanbhita, mudit aur nishabd karate rahen...aameen

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