मंगलवार, जुलाई 19, 2011

Suno aatankwadi..by Javed Akhtar

31 mahinon ka antaraal aur fir vahi bam dhamaka. is par munbaivasiyon ko grih mantri ki peeth thokani chaahiye ya fir oopar vaale ka shukriya ada karana chaahiye. itana to sahi hai ki shivaraj paatil ke zamane men aam janta men jo lachari aur nairashya ka bhaav charam par tha usamen pichhale kuch saalon men kafi kami aai thi. aaj chidambaram ke hisab se desh ka koi kona surakshit nahin hai. par ismen naya kya hai। rahul baba kahate hain ki ham aise haadason ko rok nahin sakte। mujhe inase asahamat hone ka koi kaaran nahin dikhta। ye sab to ham bharatavasi achchhi tarah jaante hi hain। par in hukmaranon ke munh se aisa sunana achchha nahin lagata.

agar rahul itani hi saafagoi baratana chahate the to unhen  ye bhi jodana chaahiye tha ki khaaskar tab jab yahin ke log baahari shaktiyon se mil jaayen . aisa pulis v khufiya tantra majaboot kar dene bhar se hi nahin hoga. usake liye spasht neetiyon ki aavashyakta hoti hai aur usase bhi adhik unhen tezi se karyanvit karne ki ickhha shakti.pichhale kai saalon se to yahi dekhta aaya hoon ki ye sarkaar do kadam aage badhati hai fir char kadam peechhe bhi hatati nazar aati hai.

aaj jab sarkaar ki or se mayoosi aur nirasha ke svar ubhar rahe hain to mujhe javed akhtar saahab ki do saal pahle munbai hamale ki barsi par likhi ye nazam yad aa rahi hai jo nirasha ke is maahaul men bhi hamari ummeed aur hausle ko jagaaye rakhati hai. javed saahab ne is nazam men vahi bhavanaayen, vahi aakrosh vyakt kiya hain hai jo aise haadason ke baad hamare jaise aam jan apane dil men mahasoos karte hain..

mujhe poora yaki hain ki javed saahab ki aavaaz men jab aap ye nazam sunenge to bahut der tak unake kahe shabd aapke dilo dimaag ko jhinjhod kar rakh denge..


mahaveer aur buddh ki,
nanak aur chishti ki,aur gaandhi ki dharati par,
main jab aatnk ke aise nazaare dekhta hoon to,
main jab apani zamin par apane logon ke lahu ke bahate dhaare dekhta hoon to,
mere kanon men jab aati hain un mazaboor gam se larazati maaon ki chikhen,
ki jinake bete yah kahakar ge the, shaam se pahle hi ghar laut aaenge ham to,
main jab bhi dekhta hoon sooni aur ujadi hui maangen,
ye sab hairaan se chehare, ye sab bheengi hui aankhen,
to meri aankhen harasu dhoondhati hain un darindon ko,
jinhonne tren men, bas men, jinhonne sadako men, baajaron men bam aake hain fode,
jinhonne aspatalon par bhi apani goliyan barasaai, mandir aur masjid tak nahin chhode,
jinhonne mere hi logon ke khoon se mere shaharon ko rnga hai,
vo jinka hona hi haivaniyat ki intaha hai,
mere logon jo tum sabaki tamanna hai, vahi meri tamanna hai,
ki in jaise darindon ki har ek saazish ko main nakaam dekhoon,
jo hona chaahiye inka main vo anjaam dekhoon ,
magar kanoon aur insaf jab anjaam ki jaanib inhen le ja rahe hon to,
main inamen se kisi bhi ek se ik baar milna chahta hoon.

mujhe yah poochhana hai,
door se dekhoon to tum bhi jaise ek insan lagate ho,
tumhaare tan men fir kyoon bhediyon ka khoon bahata hai ?
tumhari saans men saanpon ki ye funkar kabse hai ?
tumhari soch men yah zahar hai kaisa ?
tumhen duniya ki har neki har ik achchhaai se inkar kabse hai?
tumhari zindagi itani bhayanak aur tumhari aatma aatnk se beemaar kabse hai?


suno aatankavadi,
mujhe gussa bhi aata hai, taras bhi aata hai tum par,
ki tum to bas pyaade ho,
jinhonne hai tumhen aage badhaya vo khilaadi door baithe hain,
bahut chalak bante hain, bahut magaroor baithe hain,
zara samajho, zara samajho, tumhari dushmani ham se nahin hain,
jahan se aae ho mudakar zara dekho, tumhara asali dushman to vahin hain,
vo jinake haath men kathputaliyon ki tarah tum khele,
vo jinake kahane par tumane bahaaye khoon ke rele,
tumhaare to hai vo dushman, jinhonne nafaraton ka yah sabak tumako rataya hai,
tumhaare to hai vo dushman jinhonne tumako aise raaste men la ke chhoda hai,
jo raasta aaj tumako maut ke daravaze laya hai,
yah ek dhokha hai, ek andher hai, ek loot hai samajho,
jo samajhaya gaya hai tumako vo sab jhooth hai samajho,


koi pal bhar n ye samajhe ki main zazabaat men bas yoon hi bahata hoon,
mujhe maaloom hai vo sun rahe hain jinase kahata hoon,
abhi tak vakat hai jo pattiyan aankhon ki khul jaayen,
abhi tak vakat hai jo nafaraton ke daag dhul jaayen,
abhi tak vakat hai hamane koi bhi had nahin todi,
abhi tak vakat hai hamane ummeed ab tak nahin chhodi,
abhi tak vakat hai chaho to ye mausam badal jaayen,
abhi tak vakat hai jo dosti ki rasm chal jaaye,
koi dildar banake aae to dildar ham bhi hain,
magar jo dushmani thahari to fir taiyaar ham bhi hain.


 taki sanad rahe

शनिवार, जुलाई 09, 2011

Raat Hai Kuch Bheengi Bheengi...Chand Hai Kuchh Maddham Maddham...

Barish ke mausam ko dhyaan men rakhte hue kuch dinon pahle mainne lata ji ka gaya film 'parakh' ka geet sunavaya tha. barish ka mausam abhi thama nahin hai. ab aaj mere shahar ka mausam dekhiye na. baahar thndi bayaren to hai hi aur unki sangat men barish ki reshami fuhaar bhi hai. to is bheegi rat men bheenga bheenga sa roomaniyat se bhara ik nagma ho jaaye.


aaj ka ye nagma mainne chuna hai film 'mujhe jeene do' se jo san 1963 men pradarshit hui thi. isake sangeetakaar the Jaidevsaahab. vaise kya aapako pata hai ki Jaidevpahali baar pandrah saal ki umr men ghar se bhagkar munbai aae the to unka sapana ek film abhineta banane ka tha. yahan tak ki bataur bal kalakar unhonne saat aath filmen ki bhi. par pita ke achaanak nidhan ne unake kairiyar ki disha hi badal di. ghar ki jimmevariyan sanbhaalne ke liye Jaidevludhiyana aa ge. bahan ki shadi kara lene ke baad Jaidevne chalis ke dashak men lakhanoo ke ustad akabar ali se sangeet ki shiksha li. Jaidevne pahle unake liye aur baad men es di barman jaise sangeetakaar ke sahaayak ka kaam kiya. Jaidevka durbhaagya raha ki unake anoothe sangeet nirdeshan ke baavajood unki bahut saari filmen jaise reshama v shera, aalaap,gaman v anakahi nahin chalin. par 'mujhe jeene do' aur 'ham donon' ne unhen vyavasayik safalta ka munh dikhalaya.

Jaidev shastriya sangeet ke achchhe jaanakar the. unake rachit geet aksar kisi na kisi raag par aadhaarit hua karte the. 'mujhe jeene do' ka ye geet 'raag dhani' par aadhaarit hai. vastutah raag dhani, raag maalakos se nikala hua raag hai. shastriya sangeet ke jaanakar raag dhani ko raag maalakos ka roomani , mithas bhara roop maante hain. 

par ye geet agar itana madhur v surila ban pada hai to usamen Jaidevke sangeet se kahin adhik sahir ludhiyanavi ke bolon aur lata ji ki gaayiki ka haath tha.  sahir ke baare men ye kaha jata tha ki vo maante the ki geet ke lokapriya hone men sabse bada haath geetakar ka hota hai. isi vajah se kisi bhi film men kaam karne ke pahle unki shart hoti thi ki unka paarishramik sangeetakaar se ek rupaya jyada rahe.

vaise sahir ki shayari isaki hakadaar bhi thi. ab isi geet ko len . shabdon ke doharav ka kitana khoobasoorat prayog kiya hai sahir ne geet ke har antre men. pahle antre men sahir likhte hain
tum aao to aankhen kholen
soi hui paayal ki chham chham
ab aap hi bataiye, ek muzarevali isase behatar kin lafajon se mahafil men aae apane prashansakon ka dil jeet sakti hai? aur geet ke teesara antre men istemaal kiye ge prakritik roopakon ko sunkar todil se bas vaah vaah hi nikalti hai. zara in panktiyon par gaur faramaayen

tapate dil par yoon girati hai
teri nazar se pyar ki shabanam
jalte hue jangal par jaise
barakha barase ruk-ruk tham-tham

vaise to shokh aur chanchal geeton ke liye aasha taai kai sangeetakaron ki pahali pasand hua karati thin par yahan lata ji ne bhi apani gaayiki men geet ke haav bhaavon ko badi khoobasoorati se pakada hai. masalan jab lata hosh men thodi behoshi hai..gaati hain to lagata hai bas ab moorchhit ho hi gayeen.

to aaiye sunte hain is geet ko lata ji ki surili aavaaz men

rat bhi hai kuch bheegi-bheegi
chaand bhi hai kuch maddham-maddham
tum aao to aankhen kholen
soi hui paayal ki chham chham

kisako bataayen kaise bataayen
aaj ajab hai dil ka aalam
chain bhi hai kuch halka halka
dard bhi hai kuch maddham maddham
chham-chham, chham-chham, chham-chham, chham-chham

tapate dil par yoon girati hai
teri nazar se pyar ki shabanam
jalte hue jangal par jaise
barakha barase ruk-ruk tham-tham
chham-chham, chham-chham, chham-chham, chham-chham
hosh men thodi behoshi hai
behoshi men hosh hai kam kam
tujhako paane ki koshish men
donon jahan se kho hi ge ham
chham-chham, chham-chham, chham-chham, chham-chham

film men ye geet filmaya gaya tha vahida ji aur suneel datt par





रविवार, जुलाई 03, 2011

Gopal Das Neeraj ke kuchh pasandeeda 'Muktak'

Gopal Das Neeraj ki kavitaon aur anki kuch pasandida gajalon ko pahle bhi pesh kar chuka hoon. par Neeraj ka kavya sansaar unki kavitaon aur ghazalon tak hi seemit nahin hai. urdu rubaaiyon ke andaaj men unhonne jo chand panktiyan likhin unhonne usako 'muktak' ka nam diya. aur kya kamaal ke muktak likhe hain Gopal Das Neeraj ji ne..

prasiddh kavya sameekshak sherajng garg ne Neeraj ke muktakon ki lokapriyata ke baare men likhte hain..

Neeraj ke muktak behisaab saraahe ge. iska ek kaaran Neeraj ki mili juli ganga jamuni bhasha thi. jise samajhne ke liye shabdakosh ulatne ki jaroorat nahin thi. ismen hindi ka sanskar tha to urdu ki zindadili in donon khoobiyon ke saath Neeraj ke andaje bayan ne apana hunar dikhaya aur unake muktak bhi geetikaon ke samaan yaadgaar aur marmasparshi ban ge.

aaj Neeraj ke likhe apane pasandida muktakon se aapaka parichay karata hoon. aasha hai ye aap ko bhi utne hi pasand aaenge jitane mujhe aate hain...


(1)
kafan badha to kis liye nazar too dabadaba gai?
singar kyon saham gaya bahaar kyon laja gai?
n janm kuch n mrityu kuch bas itani sirf baat hai ‌
kisi ki aankh khul gai, kisi ko nind aa gai.

(2)
khushi jisane khoji vah dhan le ke lauta,
hansi jisane khoji chaman le ke lauta,
magar pyar ko khojane jo chala vah
n tan le ke lauta, n man le ke lauta.

(3)
rat idhar dhalti to din udhar nikalta hai
koi yahan rukta to koi vahan chalta hai
deep au patnge men fark sirf itana hai
ek jalke bujhta hai, ek bujhake jalta hai

(4)
ban ge hukkaam ve sab joki beimaan the,
ho ge lidar ki dum jo kal talak darabaan the,
mere malik ! aur bhi to sab hain sukhi tere yahan,
sirf ve hi hain dukhi jo kuch n bas insan the.

(5)
chhedane par maun bhi vachal ho jata hai, dost !
tootne par aaina bhi kaal ho jata hai dost
mat karo jyada havan tum aadami ke khoon ka
jalke kala koyla bhi lal ho jata hai dost !

chalte chalte gopal das Neeraj dvara apani kavya rachanaaon par likhi baat uddhrit karana chahoonga
jab likhne ke liye likha jata hai tab jo kuch likha jata hai usaka nam hai gadya. par jab likhe bina n raha jaaye aur jo khud khud likh jaaye to usaka nam hai kavita. mere jeevan men kavita likhi nahin gai. khud likh likh gai hai, aise hi jaise pahadon par nirjhar aur foolon par oos ki kahani.