Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Wo Ishq Jo Hum Se Rooth Gaya Ab Uska Haal Batayein Kya : A sensitive ghazal by Fareeda Khanam / Athar Nafees

Pichhali post men ham baat kar rahe the shikave aur shikayaton ki jo rishton ki chamak banaye rahte hain. Par yahi shikayaten is had tak badh jayen ki mamala prem se virah ka roop le le, tab kitne kathin daur se gujarta hai ye tanha dil! Sach poochhiye to zindagi badamaja ho jati hai. Koee hansi thitholi hamen bardasht nahin hoti. Ham doosaron se to door bhagate hi hain apani yadon se bhi peechha chhudane ki koshish men lage rahte hain. Par kamabakht yaden nahin jatin. Vo rahati hain hamare aas pas.... hamare ekakipan ke ahasas ko aur pukhta banane ke liye.

Pakistani shayar Athar Nafees ki mashahoor ghazal vo ishq jo hamse rooth gaya, ab uska haal batayen kya, men kuchh aisi hi bhavanaon ki jhalak milti hai. Athar sahab ne shayad jyada likha nahin. Unaki niji zindagi ke bare mein to pata nahin par apani diaryi men unke likhe kuchh ashaaar hamesha se dil ko chhoote rahe hain. Masalan ye sher mulahaja faramaiye

jal gaya sara badan in mausamon ki aag men
yek mausam rooh ka hai jisamen ab jinda hoon main


ya fir ise hi dekhiye
mere hothon ka tabassum de gaya dhokha tujhe
toone mujhako baag jana dekh le sehara hoon main

aur unaki likhi ye panktiyan bhi mujhe pasand hain
toot jate hain kabhi mere kinare mujh men
doob jata hai kabhi mujh men samandar mera


to aaiye lautte hain athar sahab ki ghazal para..

vo ishq jo hamase rooth gaya, ab usaka haal batayen kya,
koee mehar nahin, koee qahar nahin, fir sachcha sher sunayen kya
qahar - vipatti

Jo meri prerana, meri bhavanaon ki shrot thi jab vo hi mujhse rooth kar chali gaee fir uske bare men baten karne se kya fayada. Uske jane se jyada badi aafat kaun si aa gaee jo is bujhe dil men sachche ashaaaron ki ravani bhar de!

ek hijr jo hamako lahak hai, ta-der use duharayen kya,
vo zahar jo dil men utar liya, fir usake naaz uthayen kya
hijr -viyog, lahak- mila huaa, naaz - nakhre

Mujhe apane viyog ke sath kuchh pal to ekant men jine dijiye. Ek bar jis gham ko pi liya use sab ke samane dohra kar bematalab tool dena mere dil ko gavara nahin hai.

ek aag gam-ye-tanhaee ki, jo sare badan men fail gaee,
jab jism hin sara jalta ho, fir daman-e-dil ko bachayen kya


Aap kahate hain sanbhalo apane dil ko? Saval to ye hai ki kis kis ko sambhale ? Ab to is jism ka koee bhi hissa usaki tadap se achhoota nahin rah gaya hai.

ham nagmasara kuchh ghazalon ken, ham sooratagar kuchh khvabon ke,
bezazba-e-shauk sunayen kya, koee khvab n hon to batayen kya

nagmasara - gayak
Thik hai dost ki hamne bhi zindagi men chand hasin khvab dekhe hain..Is mehfil men kuchh ghazalen gaee hain par vo tab ki baat thi. Aaj is udasi, is tanhaee ke aalam men mujhse kuchh sunne ki ummeed aap kaise rakh sakte hain. Iss vyathit hrday men to ab sapanon ke liye bhi koee jagah nahin bachi.

Is ghazal ko itni makabooliyat dilane men jitna Athar Nafes ka hath hai utana
hi shrey pakistan ki mashahoor ghazal gayika Farida khanam ko bhi milna chahiye. Farida ji ki gayiki se to aap sab vakif hi hain. Farida ji ki aawaz ka lutf uthaiye aur bataiye ki ye ghazal aapko kaisi lagi?.