Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Suno achchha nahin lagta ... in my voice

Kya aap apane kisi priy ke prati Possessive hain?
vaise to ham sabhi hote hain kabhi chhoti si kisi vastu ke liye to kabhi apane kisi khas ke liye. par ye Possessiveness kuchh jyada ho jaye to vahi hal hota hai jo is shayar ka ho raha hai.... dil ki majabooriyon ko bhala kaun lagam de sakata hai.
Par aisa rog na hi lage to behatar varna 'Possessiveness' ka ye kida dukh bhi bahut deta hai.

is rachna ka ek hissa bahut pahale mujhe apani ek post par tippani ke roop men mila tha. jab poora pada to laga ki hai to sadi si nazm par dil ko chhooti huee isiliye ise aaj aap sab ke sath bant raha hoon

suno achchha nahin lagta
ki koee doosara dekhe
tumhari sharabati aankhen
lab o rukhasar1 aur palaken
siyah lanbi ghani julfen
sarahe doosara koee
mujhe achchha nahin lagta

suno achchha nahin lagta
kare jab tajakira2 koee
kare jab tabasara3 koee
tumhari jat ko khoje
tumhari bat ko soche
mujhe achchha nahin lagta

suno achchha nahin lagta
tumhari muskarahat par
hajaron log marate hon
tumhari ek aahat par
hajaron dil dhadakate hon
kisi ka tum pe yoon marana
mujhe achchha nahin lagta

suno achchha nahin lagta
hava gujare tumhen chhu kar
na hoga jabt4 ye mujhase
kare koee ye gustakhi
tumhari julfen bikhar jayen
tumhara lams5 pa jayen
mujhe achchha nahin lagta

suno achchha nahin lagta
ki tumako fool bhi dekhen
tumhare pas se mahaken
ya chanda ki gujarish ho
ki apani roshani bakhshoon
rukh e janan koee dekhe
mujhe achchha nahin lagta


1. gala, 2. charcha, 3. vistar se ghatana ka vivaran dena, 4. bardasht, 5. sparsh



Is nazm ki bhavanaon ko apani aavaj men utarane ki koshish ki hai. padhte vakt do jagah bhoolen huee hain kyonki recording ke samay sahi bol mere paas nahin the baad men jab najm utarane baitha to dekha ki tajakara ki jagah tajakira aur tumhare lams pe jayen ki jagah arth ke hisab se tumhara lams pa jayen hona chahiye. aasha hai aap ise najaraandaj kar denge.

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