Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Aatif Saeed ki Khoobsurat Nazm : tumhen mausam bulate hain....

Pichhale saal august mahine mein mainne ek nazm post ki thi jisaka shirshak tha ajab pagal si ladaki hai..... use kisane likha ye us waqt nahin pata tha. aaj mai jab is nazm ko pad raha tha to pata chala ki isake lekhak vahin hain jinhonne ajab pagal si ladaki hai.... likhi thi. ji han, in donon nazmon ko likha hai pakistan ke naujavan shayar Aatif Saeed sahab ne. Aatif Saeed ka apana yek jal prshth bhi hai jisaka labh aap tabhi utha sakate hain jab aap urdu lipi ke janakar hon.

aaj unaki jo najm aap ke sath bant raha hoon vo yakin hai ki aapake liye naee hogi. aaj antarajal par jab bhatak raha tha to roman mein ye mujhe likhi mili. ye najm unhonne apani naee kitab 'tumhen mausam bulate hain' ke unvan mein likhi hai. najm pyar ke hasas jajbaton se labarej hai. apane prem aur mausam ki badalati ruton ko aapas mein behad behatarin tarike se guntha hai shayar ne. vishvas nahin hota to khud hi padakar dekhiye na..

mere andar bahut din se
ki jaise jang jari hai
ajab beikhtiyari hai

main na chahoon magar fir bhi, tumhari soch rahati hai
har ik mausam ki dastak se tumhara aks banata hai
kabhi barish tumhare shabanami lahaje mein dhalati hai

kabhi sharma ke ye raten
tumhare sard hothon ka dahakata lams lagati hain

kabhi patajhada...
tumhare panvon se raunde huye patton ki aavajen sunata hai

kabhi mausam gulabon ka
tumhari muskurahat ke sare manjar jagata hai
mujhe behad satata hai

kabhi palaken tumhari dhoop ode jism o jan par sham karati hain
kabhi aankhen, mere likhe huye misaron ko apane nam karati hain

main khush hoon ya udasi ke kisi mausam se lipata hoon
koee mahafil ho tanahaee mein ya mahafil mein tanaha hoon
ya apani hi lagaee aag mein bujh-bujh kar jalata hoon


mujhe mahasoos hota hai
mere andar bahut din se
ki jaise jang jari hai
ajab beikhtiyari hai

aur is beikhtiyari mein
mere jajbe, mere alafaj mujh se rooth jate hain
main kuchh bhi kah nahin sakata, main kuchh bhi likh nahin sakata
udasi odh leta hoon
aur in lamahon ki muththi mein
tumhari yad ke juganu kahin jab jagamagate hain
ye bite vakt ke saye
meri bekhvab aankhon mein, kaee dipak jalate hain
mujhe mahasoos hota hai
mujhe tum ko batana hai
ki rut badale to panchhi bhi gharon ko laut aate hain
suno janan chale aao tumhen mausam bulate hain....


agar aapako ye najm pasand aaee to yakinan aap inhen bhi padana pasand karenge...

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