Apane blog par aapake saath mai Faiz ka kalaam baanT chuka hoon. Aaj kee ye mahafil hai Parveen Shakir ke naam. Parveen Shakir ka naam pahalee baar internet par urdoo kavita ke ek manch par suna thaa. Waqt ke saath usee manch par is mashahoor paakistaanee shaayara kee kee ghajalein aur najmein paDhane ka mauka mila aur unake kaavya kee sanvedanasheelata aur saafagoee ne muze khaasa prabhaavit kiyaa. Koshish karoonga ki unakee chand behatareen krtiyaa aapake saamane rakh sakoo jo unakee shakhsiyat ko aapake saamane jaahir kar sake.Parveen Shakir ko aisee shaayara me shumaar kiya jaata hai jinhonne apanee kavita me vo sab bebaakee se bayaa kiya jo unhonne apanee jindagee me mahasoos kiya aur sahaa. unaka sabase pahala ghajalon aur najmon ka sangrah Khushboo (1976) tab prakaashit hua jab vo 24 varSh kee thee. Yeman Taims ne Paraveen Shakir ke is sangrah ke baare me likha hai ki yoo to kavitao me khushaboo ek aisa prateek hai jo us pyaar kee kahaanee kahata hai jo kabhee mila nahee. par paraveen jis khushaboo kee baat karatee hai vo ek aise phool kee hai jisane pooree shiddat se fija me apanee mahak bikheree, par vo apano dvaara upekShit hee raha . vo bhee us soorat tak ki aakhirakaar vo murazaakar miTTee kee gard faankane par majaboor huaa. unaka ek behad mashahoor sher yaad paData hai
vo to Khushbuu hai havaao.n me.n bikhar jaayegaa
masalaa phuul ka hai phuul kidhar jaayegaa
ham to samajhe the ke ek zaKhm hai bhar jaayegaa
kyaa Khabar thii ke rag-e-jaa.N me.n utar jaayegaa
Darasal, ye sangrah kishoraavastha se nikal kar yuvaavastha me pravesh karatee laDakee ke khvaabo, khushiyo aur rusavaiyo ka aeena hai. Ab unakee isee najm ko dekhe...kis tarah yahaa apane saathee kee kalpanao me khoee ye laDakee madhur sapano ke jaal bunate-bunate ek chubhatee sachchaee ke roobaroo aa jaatee hai
Apne bister pe buhut dair se mein neem daraz
Sochti thi ke woh is waqt kahan par ho ga?
Mein yahan hoon magar uss koocha-e-rang-o-boo mein
Roz ki tarha se woh aaj bhi aaya ho ga
Aur jab us ne wahan mujh ko na paya ho ga...........
Aap ko ilm hay,woh aaj nahin aai hain?
Meri har dost se us ne yahi poocha hoga
Kiyon nahin aai woh? Kiya baat hui hay aakhir?
Khud is baat par sau baar woh uljha ho ga
Kal woh aaiey gee tu mein uss se nahin boloon ga
Aap hi aap kaee baar woh rootha ho ga
Woh nahin hay tu bulandi ka safar kitna kathin
Seerhiyaan charhte hue uss ne socha ho ga
Rahdaari mein, harey lawn mein, phoolon ke qareeb
Us ne har simt mujhe aa ke dhoondha ho ga
Naam bhoole se jo mera kahin aaya ho ga
Ghair mehsoos tareeqey se woh chonka ho ga
Aik jumley ko kai baar sunaya ho gaa
Baat kartey huey sau baar woh bhoola ho gaa
Yeh jo larki nai aai hai? kahin woh to nahin?
Us ne har chehra yahi soch ke dekha ho ga
Jaan-e-mehfil hai magar aaj faqat merey baghair
Haye kiss darja wohi bazm mein tanha ho gaa
Kabhi sannaton se wehshat jo hui ho gee use
Us ne besakhta phir mujh ko pukaara ho ga
Chalte chalte koi maanoos si aahat paakar
Doston ko bhi kissi uzr se roka ho gaa
Yaad kar ke mujhey num ho gai hon gee palkein
aankh mein par gaya kuch keh ke yeh tala ho ga
aur ghabra ke kitaabon mein jo lee ho gee panah
har satr mein mera chehra ubher aaya ho ga
jab mili ho gee ussey meri alaalat ki khabar
us ne aahista se deewar ko thama ho gaa
ittifaqan mujhey us shaam meri dost mili
mein ne poocha ke ,suno, ?aaiey they woh? Kaisey thay??
Us ne aik lamhey ko dekha mujhey aur phir hans dee
us hansi mein tu woh talkhi thi ke us se aage
kiya kaha uss ne..mujhey yaad nahin hai laiken?
itna maaloom hai....................
"khawabon ka bharam toot gaya"
Parveen Shaakir ne angrejee me MA kiya . 9 saal tak vo college mein shikShika rahee. isee dauraan inaka doosara kaavy sangrah Sad-barg (sau patte) chhap chuka thaa. paDhane-likhane me inakee kaabiliyat ka aalam ye tha ki 1986 me jab pahalee baar paakistan civil services kee pareekSha me baiThee to chun lee gee. maje kee baat ye rahee ki us imtihaan me ek savaal inakee kavita se bhee poochha gayaa.
Ghajal me to hamesha se prem, viyog, ekaakeepan, udaasee, bevafaee, aasha aur hataasha se juDee bhaavanao ko pradhaanata milee hai. kaavy sameekShako ka aisa maanana hai ki parveen shaakir ne na keval apanee ghajal aur najmon me in bhaavanao ko pramukhata dee , balki saath saath in viShayo ko unhonne ek naaree ke drdhTikoN se dekha jo tab tak urdoo kavita me Theek se ubhar ke aa nahee paaya thaa. paraveen, naajuk se naajuk bhaavanao ko sahajata se vyakt karana bakhoobee jaanatee thee. milan ke komal mulaayam jajbaato ko jis khoobasooratee se unhonne apanee is najm me ukera hai, usakee misaal samakaaleen urdoo shaayaree me nikaal paana mushkil hai.
sabz maddham roshanii me.n surKh aa.Nchal kii dhanak
sard kamare me.n machalatii garm saa.Nso.n kii mahak
baazuuo.n ke sakht halqe me.n ko_ii naazuk badan
silvaTe.n malabuus par aa.Nchal bhii kuchh Dhalakaa huaa
garmii-e-ruKhsaar se dahakii hu_ii Thaa.nDii havaa
narm zulfo.n se mulaayam u.Ngaliyo.n kii chhe.D chhaa.D
surKh ho.nTho.n par sharaarat ke kisii lamhe.n kaa aks
reshamii baaho.n me.n chuu.Dii kii kabhii maddham dhanak
sharmagii.n lahajo.n me.n dhiire se kabhii chaahat kii baat
do dilo.n kii dha.Dakano.n me.n guu.Njatii thii ek sadaa
Darasal, ye sangrah kishoraavastha se nikal kar yuvaavastha me pravesh karatee laDakee ke khvaabo, khushiyo aur rusavaiyo ka aeena hai. Ab unakee isee najm ko dekhe...kis tarah yahaa apane saathee kee kalpanao me khoee ye laDakee madhur sapano ke jaal bunate-bunate ek chubhatee sachchaee ke roobaroo aa jaatee hai
Apne bister pe buhut dair se mein neem daraz
Sochti thi ke woh is waqt kahan par ho ga?
Mein yahan hoon magar uss koocha-e-rang-o-boo mein
Roz ki tarha se woh aaj bhi aaya ho ga
Aur jab us ne wahan mujh ko na paya ho ga...........
Aap ko ilm hay,woh aaj nahin aai hain?
Meri har dost se us ne yahi poocha hoga
Kiyon nahin aai woh? Kiya baat hui hay aakhir?
Khud is baat par sau baar woh uljha ho ga
Kal woh aaiey gee tu mein uss se nahin boloon ga
Aap hi aap kaee baar woh rootha ho ga
Woh nahin hay tu bulandi ka safar kitna kathin
Seerhiyaan charhte hue uss ne socha ho ga
Rahdaari mein, harey lawn mein, phoolon ke qareeb
Us ne har simt mujhe aa ke dhoondha ho ga
Naam bhoole se jo mera kahin aaya ho ga
Ghair mehsoos tareeqey se woh chonka ho ga
Aik jumley ko kai baar sunaya ho gaa
Baat kartey huey sau baar woh bhoola ho gaa
Yeh jo larki nai aai hai? kahin woh to nahin?
Us ne har chehra yahi soch ke dekha ho ga
Jaan-e-mehfil hai magar aaj faqat merey baghair
Haye kiss darja wohi bazm mein tanha ho gaa
Kabhi sannaton se wehshat jo hui ho gee use
Us ne besakhta phir mujh ko pukaara ho ga
Chalte chalte koi maanoos si aahat paakar
Doston ko bhi kissi uzr se roka ho gaa
Yaad kar ke mujhey num ho gai hon gee palkein
aankh mein par gaya kuch keh ke yeh tala ho ga
aur ghabra ke kitaabon mein jo lee ho gee panah
har satr mein mera chehra ubher aaya ho ga
jab mili ho gee ussey meri alaalat ki khabar
us ne aahista se deewar ko thama ho gaa
ittifaqan mujhey us shaam meri dost mili
mein ne poocha ke ,suno, ?aaiey they woh? Kaisey thay??
Us ne aik lamhey ko dekha mujhey aur phir hans dee
us hansi mein tu woh talkhi thi ke us se aage
kiya kaha uss ne..mujhey yaad nahin hai laiken?
itna maaloom hai....................
"khawabon ka bharam toot gaya"
Parveen Shaakir ne angrejee me MA kiya . 9 saal tak vo college mein shikShika rahee. isee dauraan inaka doosara kaavy sangrah Sad-barg (sau patte) chhap chuka thaa. paDhane-likhane me inakee kaabiliyat ka aalam ye tha ki 1986 me jab pahalee baar paakistan civil services kee pareekSha me baiThee to chun lee gee. maje kee baat ye rahee ki us imtihaan me ek savaal inakee kavita se bhee poochha gayaa.
Ghajal me to hamesha se prem, viyog, ekaakeepan, udaasee, bevafaee, aasha aur hataasha se juDee bhaavanao ko pradhaanata milee hai. kaavy sameekShako ka aisa maanana hai ki parveen shaakir ne na keval apanee ghajal aur najmon me in bhaavanao ko pramukhata dee , balki saath saath in viShayo ko unhonne ek naaree ke drdhTikoN se dekha jo tab tak urdoo kavita me Theek se ubhar ke aa nahee paaya thaa. paraveen, naajuk se naajuk bhaavanao ko sahajata se vyakt karana bakhoobee jaanatee thee. milan ke komal mulaayam jajbaato ko jis khoobasooratee se unhonne apanee is najm me ukera hai, usakee misaal samakaaleen urdoo shaayaree me nikaal paana mushkil hai.
sabz maddham roshanii me.n surKh aa.Nchal kii dhanak
sard kamare me.n machalatii garm saa.Nso.n kii mahak
baazuuo.n ke sakht halqe me.n ko_ii naazuk badan
silvaTe.n malabuus par aa.Nchal bhii kuchh Dhalakaa huaa
garmii-e-ruKhsaar se dahakii hu_ii Thaa.nDii havaa
narm zulfo.n se mulaayam u.Ngaliyo.n kii chhe.D chhaa.D
surKh ho.nTho.n par sharaarat ke kisii lamhe.n kaa aks
reshamii baaho.n me.n chuu.Dii kii kabhii maddham dhanak
sharmagii.n lahajo.n me.n dhiire se kabhii chaahat kii baat
do dilo.n kii dha.Dakano.n me.n guu.Njatii thii ek sadaa
kaa.Npate ho.nTho.n pe thii allaah se sirf ek duaa
kaash ye lamhe Thahar jaaye.n Thahar jaaye.n zaraa
aur yahaa dekhe pyaar ke khushanuma ahasaas ko yaado ki giraft me kaid karatee ye ghazal apane pravaah me paaThak ko kis tarah baha le jaatee hai.
sundar komal sapano.n kii baaraat guzar ga_ii jaanaa.N
dhuup aa.Nkho.n tak aa pahu.Nchii hai raat guzar ga_ii jaanaa.N
bhor samay tak jis ne hame.n baaham ulajhaaye rakhaa
vo albelii resham jaisii baat guzar ga_ii jaanaa.N
[baaham=with each other]
sadaa kii dekhii raat hame.n is baar milii to chup ke se
Khaalii haath pe rakh ke kyaa sauGaat guzar ga_ii jaanaa.N
kis ko.npal kii aas me.n ab tak vaise hii sar-sabz ho tum
ab to dhuup kaa mausam hai barasaat guzar ga_ii jaanaa.N
log na jaane kin raato.n kii muuraade.n maa.Ngaa karate hai.n
apanii raat to vo jo tere saath guzar ga_ii jaanaa.N
Jo shakhs tees kee umr ke pahale hee seleebreTee ka darja pa chuka ho usakee jindagee me khushiyo kee kya kamee . par kya esa ho paaya tha paraveen ke saath ? kaavy aur naukaree dono me kam umr me itanee tarakkee pa kar bhee apanee nijee jindagee me unhe kaafee niraasha haath lagee thee. gam aur khushee ka ye mishraN unakee lekhanee me jagah-jagah saaf dikhaee paData hai.
kuchh to hava bhee sard thee kuchh tha tera khayaal bhee
dil ko khushee ke saath saath hota raha malaal bhee
baat vo aadhee raat kee raat vo poore chaand kee
chaand bhee ain *chet ka us pe tera **jamaal bhee
* ek mahine ka naam ** sundarata
sab se najar bacha ke vo muz ko aise dekhate
ek dafa to ruk gee gardish-e-maah-o-saal bhee
dil to chamak sakega kya fir bhee taraash ke dekh lo
*sheeshaagaraan-e-shahar ke haath ka ye kamaal bhee
* sheeshe par kaam karane vaala
us ko na pa sake the jab dil ka ajeeb haal tha
ab jo palaT ke dekhiye baat thee kuchh *muhaal bhee
* mushkil
meree talab tha ek shakhs vo jo nahee mila to fir
haath dua se yoo gira bhool gaya savaal bhee
shaam kee naasamaz hava poochh rahee hai ik pata
mauj-e-hava-e-koo-e-yaar kuchh to mera khayaal bhee
us ke hee baajooo me aur us ko hee sochate rahe
jism kee khvaahisho pe the rooh ke aur jaal bhee
Agalee posT me baate hongee unakee kuchh barish se judi nazmon kee. to chalate-chalate ek jhalak dekhie unhe khud ek mushaayare mein
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